Loved it.

Wow, I love how you wrote this! So much emotion!

yeah really dark and twisted and sick

its just perfect

That was a really good dark fic. I love it!

I love when he whispers," This was all for you". I was like.. That is so COOL!

keep em comin.

I don't mind dark and I really loved the story within the story. It was cool.

Heehee. "This was all for you." I've seen the idea executed quite a few times - most of the time in longer, epic fics - but it's refreshing to see it so quick. The reiteration of "silly little boy" and "silly little girl" got to be a little tiresome, but not too bad. And that ending made it all worthwhile. (Who says I don't like a macabre and darkness with my fluff, eh?)

I really like the way this one was written, its a very unique style.

Ok, Sasuke was NOT Occ! THis stori is so good! Its a good thing you made it dark because if you didn't, it would be a little weird. Great job!

it was sort of scary but...

what the heck THIS WAS SUCH AN AWESOME STORY!

I love tragedy and angst stories, i don't know why i do. lol

This was beautiful. I liked the word play and the certain points where her story broke through. Dark, yes, but deffinetly one of my favorites. Keep up the good work, your writing is very good. well, to me at least.

i like it. i know it's dark and everything, but every once in a while you need a good story like this to balance out the 'lighter' stories, ya know?

(good job!)

oh ... i loved that. _

Tenshi: (licks her lips) Mm! Dark and delicious! A true delicacy, like dark chocolate!

Kage: -_-" Why are you comparing this fic to desserts?

Tenshi: (nods head twice) Because it's that awesome...! Anyways, great story; LOVED the ending! _ Keep writing!

Wow, as dark as it was I really liked it! That was good! Your a good writer!

Ramen101

Nice, I really liked this. You should write more.