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| Reviews for Heart To Heart |
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  Guest 6/5/11 . chapter 1 i have one word that can descibe that... CUTE |
 Y-C-H-3000 5/7/10 . chapter 1awsome perfect, simple, in charichaiter sparrabeth |
| Spunkalovely 10/6/09 . chapter 1 Gee, I wonder who that chap is. ;D Rockin fanfic. I loved the part from Jack's past. (: |
| parisdamour 6/27/09 . chapter 1 sparrabeth 4ever! They are just so cute! |
| dancer in the rain 3/11/09 . chapter 1 i liked |
| unknown 11/14/08 . chapter 1 That was so beautiful and sweet!I really love it! |
| Future Mrs. Sparrow 5/4/08 . chapter 1 Aw! How sweet! I loved this oneshot! ! |
| Crysania 12/10/07 . chapter 1 Very sweet story. I really enjoyed reading it. Just a teeny bit of constructive criticism, which has little to do with your writing, which I thought was lovely. When a new person speaks it should always be in a new paragraph. Sometimes it got confusing when Elizabeth would speak and Jack would interrupt, then it went back to Elizabeth all in one paragraph. If you break those up into separate paragraphs, it would be less confusing! |
| SilentTearsGentleTouches 8/2/07 . chapter 1 aw how cute I loved it |
| Florencia7 7/22/07 . chapter 1 Wonderful! "Why was it that he could read things from her face that she couldn’t read from her soul?" - loved that:) Great writing! |
| lollllllllllll 4/12/07 . chapter 1 AW. That was precious. Just precious. :D |
| madame.alexandra 4/2/07 . chapter 1 Absolutely perfect! Really, my favorite thing to read with all the sickening Will-and-ELizabeth-belong-together crap my friends give me! |
| Salt Sauce Paans 4/1/07 . chapter 1 I have one thing to say... AW! That was so cute, you r a very talented writer. REally good job with that, I think it would make a good full story instead of a oneshot, but that's just my opinion. LOL well great job. |
| thisaccount 4/1/07 . chapter 1 It was good, all in all. A bit jack-being-a-bit-too-soppy for my liking but it was good. You need to watch your paragraphs, there should be at least a new line for every time a different person speaks. |
| drey'auc475 4/1/07 . chapter 1 hey there. i didn't mind this little fic. but there was something... iffy... about it. it was beautifully written, and very a very sweet story. you covered the emotional part well, and, in my humble opinion, quite accurately. but the ending was pressured, if you ask me. it seemed a bit forcefull. i mean, jack would most certaily pressure elizabeth into a relationship with him, but i somehow think that he would do it weather she married will or not. jack, i think, is a man of action, not words. anyway, its a sweet little story, and i would eventually like jack and elizabeth to get together. maybe at the end of the next movie, eh? keep up the writing! |
