Wow, this story speeds right along. Nice pacing. And a different storyline than I've seen around these parts. Me likey. :)

ack!u have to update! dont leave me hanging here! good chapter, im starting to really like roxanne

oo i like it. i feel heat. lol update soon please!

hmm kewl

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i like

Woot. Intriguing.

good start...