Very nice! I like it a lot!

Much better flow than the old one. Almost makes me wanna start rewriting my old story. xD

I like it, though. Nice premise. Very well written.

o! :D suspense in love...me likey. X3 can't wait for the next chapter! :3

Ok, Im going to be completely honest. I don't like this. And Im glad you don't own Naruto.

Aha! She lives yet again! Can't wait to red the new stuff!

Okay. Look, these gals are MS! Summonign worst fears and controlling emotions are not the types of powers they have in Konoha! You can have little ones, like being able to run faster than humans run. This isn't a flame, i'm just telling you. Just, like, make it more beliveable. I hope you have better chapters, cuz I will visit you!

Faiye

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Ok, to clarify, those reviews were not flames. A bit critical yes but not a flame. These OCs are Mary Sues, look it up on Google and look up the Mary Sue Litmus test, be honest with your self and you see for yourself. You have potential though, just tone your OCs down a bit, as a general rule of thumb they should be BELEVABLE. No, this is not a flame, but an honest opinion expressed by someone not fond of your story, which will happen I assure you. But for the love of god at least take the Mary Sue Litmus test and be honest.

AWSOME PLEASE UPDATE SOON THANKS

Aw, how sweet! I love this chapter, and this story, they're wonderful. I hope you don't give up on the story, but I'm in no place to tell you to do anything, because I happen to do the same thing myself.

TOO SHORT!

Please Update Soon I love it! .

I like the story *That was sing-song voice* Nice, keep it up sweety!

Alana

hey sista! you better write my chappy now! c'mon. you like need to write more... now!

yo, since i forgot to review this chapter before and didnt get to beta it, im reviewing now. this is so awesome. also, im reviewing in the hopes you might possibly write more of this instead of dropping it. i really like this story and hope it keeps going!

this is a great story I love it please please for the love of god up date real soon please adn thank you

I love Dragonlance! Im reading 'The Crystal Chalice' at the moment. So how old is everybody again?

Interesting Story. I like it.