Where have you gone, pretty bird? The net is cold without you.
Well done as usual. I hope this writing gives you joy and that you return to it soon; you leave the masses hungry for good narrative.

Wow, i really loved this story and i do hope that you continue it one day!

Noo! Caught in the snare of another story that hasn't been updated in ages! Curses, your stories are far too enticing to stay away. I need to learn to check for the 'completed' sign.

Hmm, angsty wonderfulness. I just love the dark tone to it, it's just so enticing. And geez, I thought my eyeballs were going to pop out of my skull in shock when you killed of Bobby. Crazy. And the cure not sticking? Crazy times two.

Angst-ridden, cynical Remy and an intoxicated and lethal Rogue. Never a better combination.

You're writing style is amazing, as is this story, so please, re-post soon!

-Maggie

That was amazing! I hope this is one story you'll update within the year!

This looks good! I can't wait to read more! = )

Nice to see you back! And with three new stories, no less. This is certainly a very interesting start, though I have no idea if this is going back to the mansion or not, what with Remy being shot. Feels kind of fairy-taleish so far, if that makes sense. Like telling a story that everyone knows, except the participants.

Bits I liked: Dr. McCoy sharing his clinical observations with Rogue, or at least them getting back to her. So awful, but just like Hank to think about those things in such a situation.

the phrase "insistent snap and recoil of her genomes"

The very visceral image of "sweaty fingers dragging over a raw wound" made me cringe.

I'm vastly amused about how incredibly attracted and aroused Remy seems to be by the image of a small, angry girl beating the crap out of people. (kind of sums up most of my fandoms, actually)


"Warmth seeped from his chest, and for a beautifully fractured moment, Remy thought to himself as he pressed his fingers to that softened, heated spot over his ribcage, that this must be what love feels like."

Ouch. Absolutely lovely.

The only bit of crit I have to offer is that the phrase "young man in his early twenties" seemed a bit redundant.

omg this is awesome so far!

Ooh. I love this story already.

So Remy fell for Rogue at first glance? (And I assuming it is Rogue).

Please update soon!

More please! I'm so glad I've found a Romy in the Movie-verse that's already begun so well and stayed true (as much as you could anyway with the movie's storyline) to the comics! Yay!

Can't wait for more of this and the Ante! I shall now go read more of your works! Onward!

I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!

I've always loved your charming and cynical dark!Remy and this one's no exception. I really look forward to where this is going especially with you, the master of the angst that is ROMY, behind the pen (err, keyboard)... keep it coming :D

Favorite part:
Through the haze of smoke, and like the sound of a gunshot fired near the temple: Green eyes, glossy from too much drink. Sweat matting hair to the brow. The part of flushed lips. Satin gloves streaked with blood from cold-cocking a man three times her size…

“Be still m’ beatin’ heart.”

Favorite line:
Warmth seeped from his chest, and for a beautifully fractured moment, Remy thought to himself as he pressed his fingers to that softened, heated spot over his ribcage, that this must be what love feels like.

Absolutely Remy. Absolutely perfect.

Lovely descriptions, I especially like Remy's POV. Rogue's part is beautiful too, in a painful way, but the way you write Remy's surroundings to match his mood, what goes in his mind and his solitude ... that's what sells this story to me :).

<3

Interesting twist with the Bobby part of the story. Did I miss something though because somehow I'm confused why Rogue's gloves have blood on them. Had she beaten up the big guy in the bar or something? Go her if yes! Has she absorbed certain super strengths to be able to do this? I like how you have made them distraught with their own problems first then brought them to each other as opposed to just focusing on their problems as a couple. It is nice and I'm interested to see how they progress. Continue please!
-ShannaK

Well, holy crap! That was short, but you literally and figuratively delivered quite an ass-kicking with it! Nice work, and I really hope you start posting more again soon. That, and WHO SHOT REMY? That is simply unacceptable. He is far too pretty to kick the bucket in such a crass, quick manner. :) I need something a little more romantic...maybe having his life force sucked out in apocalyptic sex or something? Goodness knows where I could have heard of something like *that* before!

the last chapter was super long and this one is only half that! I demand more ASAP!