Poor Alfonse. The thing with the birds being smashed, that was from a movie wasn't it? I can't remember what it was called, cause the bird getting killed in the beginning made me stop watching.

OH! It's SPOILERS alter!Alphonse who dies... END SPOILERS

I was confused for a while, guess the manga's completely taken over my brain... HI HANA-CHAN!

Aw, that was so sad...but it was wonderful and beautifly written. *adds to favorites* Keep up the good work!

... *cries*...

Poor Al, dealing with all of that death and all. Why does Al always die? Seriously...

Ah, well. Keep up the good work!!

i really loved your story!! it was so sad but it was great!