update soon please!

Im waiting for update. *twitch*

Shame you haven't continued, it's really good so far.

Talia Taylor

Oh what, oh WHAT is happening?! Please continue this!! Please?!

Don't shoot the staff XD XD XD
This is good! More? -big sad eyes and robot dog-

UPDATE PLEASE
IVE ONLY JUST FOUND YOUR STORY AND ITS AWESOME
PLEASE UPDATE SOON

HAYLIIE

Brilliant... absolutely brilliant. You have written all of the characters so well... capturing all of their relationships brilliantly. Your idea is so original and is extremely interesting. Please keep up the great work and update as soon as possible! Thank you!

Hello! I don't know whether I've reviewed this before, so I don't know whether this will work, but we'll see, won't we. I watched Doomsday today, which made me cry. Thank you so much for the DVDs, I love you. And now I'm watching Doctor Who music videos on YouTube. And Dresden Dolls ones. The Dresden Dolls are so random. But amazing. And! It hasn't rained all day! It's all warm and sunny! This makes me happy. I've got caught out in the rain two days in a row, which was amusing. But the Doctor is so so annoying, the way he never says he loves Rose. Like in the Satan Pit. And Doomsday, obviously. And I want to read more of this fic, so it sucks that you can't update it, being in New Zealand. Why are you in New Zealand? I am so alone.. But whatever. Forgetting here that this is a review, as in where I talk about how amazing the fic is, rather than going on about random crap that nobody cares about anyway. I read this before and got so confused about the parallel universe thing. It is a little confusing, like where one minute Rose is head of Torchwood 3 and the next Jack is (Jack is the Face of Boe!!). And that thing with the dinosaur is very random. I just watched a video in which a girl turned into a playing card, which was strange. Love it when Jack kisses the Doctor, just like that. Jack rocks. As does Cactus. Sure you can't write song lyrics? I tried, only they turned out to be in 3, and I'm having trouble writing a tune for them in 3. Which is annoying. So I might try again with the whole lyrics thing, and try to get them to go in 4. Or I could give up on songs altogether, and write a random minimalist piece, which would be fun, if only I had inspiration. My musical muse (what a cool phrase) has disappeared, which is sad. I got a Muse CD a couple of days ago for £5, which rocked, and it has Time Is Running Out on it which always reminds me of Doctor Who because I first heard it on a Doctor Who music video. And I only realised today how Martha is in Doomsday and Army of Ghosts. It's a small world. I am going to love you and leave you now because I have 3 Latin translations still to do today (argh.. I was supposed to finish the book on Monday.. It is now thursday. Gayness). Have a nice day! x

Update soon please! :) It's fantastic so far :D

Yay! I love this! I don't know why I never read it before (except for the fact that I didn't know how amazing it is..) Haha, I forgot about Doomsday and got really confused... one minute Rose was in Torchwood, the next she wasn't... one minute Louise was typing up her Greek vocab list, the next she was reading fanfics.. dammit. Oh, who cares, I've got all half term... and then I'll get to the end of half term and be like 'dammit, where'd all the time go?!' Which always happens. But whatever. And I haven't practised the viola in about a week and I have an exam at the end of term... failing that one then... what fun. Although, in my defence, I did have exams. I like year 10 exams. It's like we get two weeks of half term. Only thing is we have a couple of exams in one of them. But still. I get sidetracked easily, don't I.. This fic is wonderful, amazing, fantastic, sexy.. oops, that one was you rather than the fic.. ahem. Ignore me. Or don't, because then I'd feel unloved. And yay! Jack kissed the Doctor! I love you! Yay Doctor Who tomorrow... with random scarecrows.. although technically I could watch Doctor Who anytime, thanks to you lending me dvds.. although, my sister has inhabited the room avec the tv to do her revision in, which is gay.. she also keeps stealing my All American Rejects CD, which is also gay, as I also keep wanting to listen to it. My mother just came in and talked to me for ages. I can't even remember what she was talking about. Oh yeh, she was trying to read Greek words. It was kind of amusing. Haha, I crashed the computer today. Which was mildly annoying. I just realised there were like no questions on diabetes in the biology exam. Or at least, not that I can remember. That's a bit gay, since it's my area of expertise. Hehe, I love long reviews. I apologise sincerely for not leaving reviews like this in ages. I'm a very busy person. Unless you hate these reviews, because they're really boring since I ramble on and on about nothing, in which case I don't apologise at all for leaving them, because I enjoy it, and I am incurable selfish. So sue me. And now I must get back to my Greek vocab, and it's really hot in here.. too bad that I can't take my jacket off.. hope you're having fun in Scotland, happy revising, and have a very shiny and wonderful day. x

this is great! rose/ doctor. 2 torchwoods and jack! whats not to love! hope your still writing this fic. please update soon!

Wowee... you didn't say you'd updated! You know I love this story, so why didn't you tell me there was more shiny goodness afoot? It be pretty... *stares at story* It's coming... coming to find them...
Nu nu, nu nu-ni-nu, nu-ni-nu, nu-ni-nu, nu-ni-nu, nuu nuu nu, nu ni-nu, nu-ni-nu, nu-ni-nu, nu-ni-nu, nu-ni-nu, nu-ni-nu, nu nu-ni-nu, nu-ni-nu, nu-ni-nu nu, nu nu...
It really works, I assure you. (That refers to both your magnifique story and to my lyrics, by the way.) Honestly. Try it.
Oh, before I forget I take no responsibility for the fact that you may, namely will, look slightly demented staring intently at a computer nu-nuu-ing the Doctor Who theme tune whilst periodically shouting, "The idiot, she's put one too many -u's on the end of the second -nu of the first line!" I didn't make you a fanatic, I didn't ask for you to be a fanatic, I didn't send away for a "Turn somebody into a complete obsessive about the object/person/foodstuff/country/John Barrowman of your choice for the ridiculously small price of £20" kits. In short, it isn't my fault. Which is not to say I don't like it. I do. Very much. I even enjoy listening to your lectures on the X-Files, believe it or not.
Stop looking at me like that.
Yes, you in the third row from the left.
You with the "Support Ten/Rose" shirt on.
Look at me when I'm addressing you.
Better.
See me after class.
I don't care if you've got an appointment with some randomer named Lysplott at --
Well, either way, no matter the name, you --
Oh.
Ah. Well then. That's different.
Off you go now.
Mustn't be late.
Eh?
Oh, the detention.
Erm...
Well...
*mutters to self* Damn, I really have to crack down with my hit lists, or I'm going to get thrown out of the Associated Board of Murderers, Torturers, Spanish Inquisition Weirdoes and Teachers.
Oh, to hell with it.
Could never resist the "Aw" factor of true *cough* love *cough* with other things included *cough* like stopwatches *cough*
*normal voice* Oh, never mind it.
Just don't let it happen again.

Gah! This is great, update soon!

Very well thought out...I want more!

I really like your stories, you seem to be better than most at capturing the characters and making them say things they really would say. The only thing I want to mention is that the character of Jake is actually gay. No joke, check out the deleted scenes for Age of Steel on the Series 2 DVD. Jake and Rickey were boyfriends!