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Lisse08
2008-07-14 . chapter 27
I love your story! I never did realize the angst in this story when i'm reading it. Only after i finished them, I got the whole picture, then, i started to feel the angst. woa. seriously, I love it!
It's really bad that Wolf was raped in WOFTGE, but then, i supposed you're not the only author who did this, so i didn't mind that. It simply made the story much more interesting, since wolf still hadn't tell yuuri about it right? hmm.. i wonder how will he react to it.. a king's husband being raped by other king. it is a serious problem.
I'm also amazed at all your ideas, wow! all those OC, power swapping, four world, elements and explanations... they are so amazing!
Looking forward to another story like this from u. Hey, wait, there's a sequel for this. yeah!!
Crazicrystal
2008-06-25 . chapter 15
Awesome story! I finished Chapter 15 last night, and had a strange dream that had Wolfram finally submit to being a concubine... I'm sure you know how that went. :p
ChristabelRose
2008-04-26 . chapter 27
Great story. Absolutely wonderful. I actually read it some time ago, and hadn’t written a review yet.

It’s definitely one of my favorite KKM stories so far. The characterization is awesome, and I love how strong and independent you’ve made Wolfram, it was quite refreshing. It was really hard to read the rape and some of the other horrible things Wolfram went through, and at some point I was just so angry on his behalf, but you wrote everything in a compelling and poignant manner, very realistic.

I was a bit surprised at the turn of events with Faraya at the end, I’m dying to see what direction you take that in the sequel. Well, actually, there are a lot of loose ends and I’m anxious to see what happens!!

I know the sequel is out already, and I can’t wait to get started on that one!
annabelle
2008-02-18 . chapter 27
oh, wow, it's been such an emotional roller costar ride, and i can't believe it's over now! (until the sequel anyway... *g*)

great ending, great story, great plot, great characterizations, great everything! it was a pleasure to read and live through wolf's experiences with him. though i must admit that i winced a few times at what our poor wolf had to live through. but everything was so realistic and in character, and wolf came out so strong in the end :)

i honestly can't wait for the sequel and see what you have planned for Faraya, and how wolf and yuuri will deal with wolf's rape. it's gonna be intense... and i think you might also touch on the subject of wolf and conrad's relationship?? *hopeful smile*

anyway, sorry for rambling. thank you for sharing such a wonderful story with us, it was a pleasure to read! :)
DarkBlueChild
2008-02-09 . chapter 27
Font make us wait too long for the sequel. =) I loved it, thanks for sharing it with us.
kotori-chan88
2008-02-07 . chapter 27
the chapter was very good!! ^o^ Although a like more Yuuram than Wolfyuu for lemmon scene, the end? this end here? this fic below, dont it?? pleace! the can`t end here!! yuuri must know what happen at wolf ;)
bye bye

sorry for my english jeje
nos leemos en el sgte fic, espero XD
blumarshin
2008-01-30 . chapter 27
That was it? Honestly I am a bit disappointed, it seemed to end so suddenly with all the loose ends not tied up like you usually write. But you did say that there is going to be a third story to this, so hopefully it is all fixed then.
But all in all, I enjoyed this story very much, it was different (in a good way) and intriging, well enough to make you want to read the next chapter as soon as possible. It's a shame I was two chapters off from completing it...lol
Until the next story!
I can't wait.
UnknownYmouS.cYcLoNe05
2008-01-19 . chapter 27
Haha! loved it! Will there be another sequel to this?
RoxasIsReal13
2008-01-18 . chapter 27
I very much enjoyed this story. I managed to read it in 2 days as soon as school was over. Its been long but a sincere pleasure to read this story. I hope you continue to write great stories such as this.
AsakuraHannah
2008-01-17 . chapter 27
what?? its the end already? hue... i never thought i review you this late >_< i'm sorry.. but oh well.. XD something about murata said bothering me.. you'r going to make a sequel right? i'm going to look after it... anyway, nice ending actually... (I'm surprised the fact that wolfram wanted to get check on sexually transmitted disease...and yuuri had finished his university? ooh how i wish i could finished it also.. XD) okay jaa naa
AsakuraHannah
2008-01-17 . chapter 26
hey! can't believe that amae went with faraya and ran away.. XD and kyota was furious.. well i somewhat tought that its too easy... about faraya I mean..he's that easy to be caught... he did fight but I don't know something tells me that its not the end yet ^^ and i was right he ran away with amae along.. LOL!! and hey, i don't know that yuuri is the pervert! XD so will he ever know about wolfram being taken by faraya? ^^ i wanted to know what his reaction might be actually ^^ okay, next!!
kawaii.may
2008-01-14 . chapter 27
Hey... You've finally finished the story, I love how you end the story and it really shows that there is gonna be a third part of it. This is gonna be one of my KKM faves. I just hope that on the next story, when Yuuri knows what happened between Faraya and Wolfram, it won't cause too much problem, unless Yuuri fried Faraya (that would be really good :)).

Well, you really did a good job...
Arayelle Lynn
2008-01-14 . chapter 27
Hey, I decided to PM-ed my review to your account. I was afraid of giving anything away (if I guessed right).

At any rate, good job.
MasterAkira
2008-01-14 . chapter 27
A future, that means more of this right? It'll be a trilogy. And if there's more, an epic. Doesn't that sound fun?
I'm happy Wolfram's ok and Yuuri didn't do anything stupid. But he did take Wolfram home in a very round about way. It took them forever! I read this on aff (and review here) and it was the first time I noticed you left different comments. Idk, I just wanted to mention it...
phantome101
2008-01-13 . chapter 27
Aww..it's finally ended. Will you be doing a sequel or is this really the end?? either way, it was a really great fic..
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