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| Bronzelynx 2007-09-01 ch 1,  | abuseThis was very sweet! It doesn't look at all like you made this in a hurry... The only thing I can think of that resembles a mistake is that Mac goes to Claire's grave. Since her body wasn't recovered, I don't think there would be an actual grave ... I would've had him go to Ground Zero. But that's just me being nitpicky. It's a great fic, I really enjoyed it! |
| jeffandjimmieschick 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abuseThis was adorably cute! I loved it! |
| Elle 2007-06-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseI told you I'd read more of your stuff and turns out it was a good choice. Absolutely fantastic... You write these two so well! |
| Jen 2007-05-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseWoo hoo! I love the spontaniety of it all. Absolutely adorable... just like MeLty should be. |
| an-angels-light 2007-05-06 ch 1, | abuseWonderful I like how you make the way they see each change from people they work with to people they love. It was funny having Lindsay ranting and having Mac ask if this is love very cute and lovely. |
| 006&½ 2007-05-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh man, now I'm completely sucked in... Your stories rock hard! Keep it up girl! |
| lullabymoon 2007-05-06 ch 1, | abuseI just love this. Brilliant as usual. Please, please, please write more MeLty! |
| Karen 2007-04-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw, that is so sweet! I would have loved to see this unfold during the 2nd season! Please continue writing for our enjoyment! |
| fido02 2007-04-02 ch 1, | abusem-a-c w-a-s s-o p-a-t-h-e-t-i-c-l-y o-o-c |
| Mac's Girl 2007-04-01 ch 1, | abuseOMG Sini! Talk about a great story. Keep up the good work! |
| chili-peppers 2007-04-01 ch 1, | abuseAw! so sweet! great job |
| Avalyn 2007-04-01 ch 1, | abuseAnother MeLty fic! I love you for writing this! "Weeks later Stella had told Mac that the pair was like a two piece puzzle: easy to solve but the pieces themselves couldn’t figure it out and find their place." -That was absolutely wonderful. I's so true! I think this deserves a continuation... and I cannot wait for The Things We Share to continue! Please, up date soon! |
| vipercharmed 2007-04-01 ch 1, | abuseI love him, usually I don't Melty but this one was cute. |