 Alex Warlorn 2007-11-02 . chapter 1Aqua. Terra. Ven.
Master Xehanort.
Don't know what his protector is, his shadow, his student, no clue.
Interesting going for what little material you had, though personally, these things might be more fun to read even after we learn more about the game. Less retraints right now. |
 Hikaru Irving 2007-05-27 . chapter 1Cool! I just finished my own story about this, except it's a novelization of the ending. And so much more angsty, lol.
I was worried you were gonna kill the youngest knight, but I was pleasantly surprised. And go oldest knight!
Haha.
The female Chaser's words at the end were ominous and make me wonder . . . but they are fitting words for a ficlet about the secret ending.
Me, I had to watch the video while I was writing mine . . . and now I've got the song that plays when the boy is frozen stuck in my head. :( It makes me sad.
This works well as a oneshot, but if you want to continue it, it's been confirmed that the names of the three knights are: Terra (the oldest one), Aqua (the female) and Ventus (the boy).
But as it is with all authors, it is your choice to continue.
Great job!
--Hikaru Irving |
 TheSeer 2007-04-01 . chapter 1I gotta thank you, because I didn't know this movie was out there until I read your ficlet. It's pretty good... except I don't think the blond kid (man, he looks *just* like Roxas, except he fights so differently) was asleep. I mean, his eyes were open and moving, he was just frozen solid and couldn't move. So I think the "birth by sleep" thing is something else.
And I couldn't tell you for sure, but I think the blue haired kid is a guy. |
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