 WhatWouldTwo-BitDo 2/9/12 . chapter 6Like it :) a lots. Update soon!... PLEASE! |
 DJxDANGAAxCRNPPS 5/14/09 . chapter 6Please keep writing this! It is really good! I love the sister stories. |
 CrimsonNight 3/28/08 . chapter 6One of the best sister stories I've read. Please write more! |
 xXEndlessImaginationXx 3/16/08 . chapter 6zomg i like lovethis story to the extreme! |
 My-Arabian-Knight 8/20/07 . chapter 6Are you going to continue writing this story? i really like it and would like to read more
:) |
 ShadowCatch93 8/1/07 . chapter 6ohohoho I want more! Nuff said! |
 IsNotHere 7/24/07 . chapter 6Tee hee, that totally reminded me of James and what my cousins did to him lol ] Gr, I MISS YOU (and Starbucks and sandwiches)! But on to more important things such as chapter six *cough*whichyoudidntletmeedit*cough*
First off, Dally is always kept in character and I really like that about your writing. Secondly, Michael acts exactly like James which is kind of weird because one, he had two lines and you managed to get him down perfectly and two, you've never met James and still you managed to get him down perfectly. Get out of my head. Third thing is the little teasings that go on between Darry and Rhia, Soda and Rhia, and Morgan and Steve. It's cute ] Last, I thought Darry was really going to let Rhia fight for a second, and if you did that I just might have to go back to Florida and kick your ass because he totally wouldn't let her do that, so double loves to you for not making her all mary-sue like!
Love(r) you ] |
 Girlz-Rule 7/24/07 . chapter 6great new chapter, update soon:) |
 dreamer 3097 7/24/07 . chapter 6good one |
 Darry's Little Sister 7/11/07 . chapter 5please update! this is such a good story. i love it. in fact i have fallen in love with it. i love the relationship Rhia has with darry. i also love the relatioship of dally and Rhia. |
 ixamxawesomex 6/15/07 . chapter 5aw that is so sweet
man i wish i had a big brother
that would be nice
all i got is a little cousin
who is 12
and a pain
anyways i love it! update soon! |
 melchick 6/1/07 . chapter 5hehe, i was gonna review about the sehinton thing and i decided to c if anyone else reviewed about it... and as i was reading them i came across one that said "hehe 'were so cool ice cubes r jelous' thats SO my msn screen name" (or somthing like that) and i had to laugh cause i just did that to my msn :P :P
nehoo
id like to c the interview plz :D:D (put it on utube:P)
keep writing
melchick |
 FlipWise 5/2/07 . chapter 5Ah, you got have a chat with them. But good chapter even though Rhia is pushin Darry's limit. But you displayed that he still cares. Keep 'em coming! |
 TheGirlWithKaleidoscopeEyes 5/1/07 . chapter 5oh, poor Rhia! and that 'we're so cool ice cubes are jealous' line is so totally my msn screen name! update soon! :)(: |
 Nelle07 5/1/07 . chapter 5aW!...he's sUch a big BrOther!...UpDate son!...pLz? |