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| aPeurDeFISH1412 2008-02-28 ch 1, | abuseHmm... another uncommon pairing, but this time a little more feasible. That's interesting how Ran is always the one that reminds others about someone else. I feel kinda sad for her... Nicely written and very descriptive. ^_^ |
| CSMars 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseran and akai? interesting. nice description. i can see evidence for this pair in the manga. :) |
| Dagron 2007-04-01 ch 1, | abuseD'aww. (Yes, this is Dagron melting into a pile of lovey goo.) Your teaser on your LJ was wonderful on its own, but this takes it that beautiful step further. And poor poor Ran. (Cuddles her gently.) Unlucky in love eh? At least she's still alive but... Ah. Poor Shuichi, not realizing the pain he's been causing her, at least not till too late, and now he probably hates himself for it. Wonderful tie in with the latest revelations as well (and now I really really REALLY want to go and hunt down any fics centred on Akai and Akemi dangit. New OTP raising its head?) And oh yes, the irony of Ran not being able to remember Akemi. She had been so passionate about the girl at the time, but it's true her memory tends to block out traumatising events like that one. I wonder what will happen when she does remember her, if ever? And if she ever meets Shuichi again. Oh the heart break. FS? I love you for this, it is wonderful, and I'm gushing so much and I only saw two mistakes at most that Rae will most certainly point out to you so... (Gushing goes on...) Insta-favourites. :D (Shall stop gushing now! Promise!) |