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| 8ami 2008-08-14 ch 1,  | abuseLol, very funny and so cute. I loved the last couple of lines. You did a great job for your first time at a dialogue fic. I never got confuzed about who was talking, great job. |
| CryptoSquirrel 2008-08-12 ch 1, | abusebrilliant last lines!! :) cheers! |
| icefire-lioness 2008-07-19 ch 1, | abuseOoh, this was fantabulous! Well done! very funny and cute! I've never read a dialogue fic before, but I think it's entirely possible you have made me come over to the darkside! Yay! EVERY LINE WAS MARVELLOUS. You are awesome. May I have some of yuor awesomeness, please? Oh, you can't give it away to non-awesome people such as myself? How vairy rude. Pfah. WELL DONE WELL DONE WELL DONE. YAY for Sirius Remus! Young puppy love! Ah. Hm. Visions. Yay. icex |
| .the.brown.eyed.girl. 2008-05-21 ch 1, | abuseI have chocolate following me around? SWEET! Okay...that was not supposed to be a pun, honest. The first attempt at a dialogue fic was amazing. :) It took me awhile to somethings that were happening, but I'm pretty sure that's because I'm slow on the uptake. Your stories are amazing!~ |
| remuslives23 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. Loved it so much I might try one. I love writing dialouge and to do a whole fic would be fun. Love your sense of humour. You had me giggling all the way through. |
| hmm 2008-04-29 ch 1, anon. | abusehey... this was realy sweet lol! Remus finally acknowledging his feelings. And for heaven's sake, nasty Siri! “E-Excuse me? You wouldn’t really, w-would you? Because I don’t think I could…” “Resist me?” “Ye--No! It’s just not a good idea.” HAHAHA just plain cute. great job! |
| LouisaB 2008-04-11 ch 1, | abuseVery amusing. I think they were both pretty much in character and unlike most dialogue fics, I didn't get confused at any point over who was speaking to who. |
| witchdivasirenqueen 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseyay! me gusta. Very Very funny and sweet |
| muumuu122 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseYay for all-dialogue fics! Luv it |
| ThatLittleClosetPerv 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abusei simply lurve it :D plus i love SBXRL :D |
| almondcrescent 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseit's sweet. :-) it's a little difficult to always know who is speaking but if you're concentrated while reading it's okay. |
| zchocolatebunniesrulezworld 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseOh ma goodness... THIS WAS ZUPAHFUNNYANDCUTEANDEVERYTHING!! The last two lines were the best ^_^ |
| Amethyst Grey 2008-02-05 ch 1, | abuseLOL! Gorgeous! Absolutely stunning and beautiful. Hilarious to read and very entertaining. Love how you got the characters down and the chocolate insert, lovely. The perspective, wonderful. Sucks you couldn't add details to the snog and such and left me to my imaginings. Love the bantering and the sarcasm. Sirius is such a ditz. XD Once again, awesome job! -Amethyst |
| Ruby Red Sunshine 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abusei am feeling... silly! that was so funny, but tromitizing at the same time. how fun! ok ill join the C2 thingy. Rebecca-Jade |
| myepitafxfparody 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseOhh, this was excellent. xD I think you've gone and turned me into a SiriusxRemus shipper. :O Well done, really loved it. :) |