I really like this and hope you continue this story!

awwh, this is kind of a sweet story.
it's been so long since you've updated, though...
is there any chance of it being continued? :/ i really look forward to it!

LOVE~

Hmm im so far liking your story, but please for the love of the gods and all that is holy please don't make Roxas like or do anything with Sephiroth :(

wow that was good and funny with sephy lol keep up the good work ^__^

Hum, a nice start. Cloud felt OOC to me. o_o I can't believe he said such...well, offensive words and his actions kinda surprise me.

I like this fic. Nicely written and the descriptions are really nice. And Axel is poor and dirt broke. I wonder what will happen between him and Roxas. Guess I have to find out.

Nice job!

I love this fic, it's just so cutely optimistic! Please update soon

TEWG: NOO~ I SPEND THREE DAYS READING THIS FIC AND YOU LEAVE IT WITH A CLIFFHANGER?!? T_T

801: I'm getting scared... what if Sephy does something to Roxas??

TEWG & 801

Ah, the 1-year anniversary of the last time this fic was updated. So sad, it's such a good one...^^ I hope that you may someday pick this one back up; my friends and I really love it!

Omg update. im gunna guess Sora is fine and staying with riku?...ep. but roxas has placed himself in trouble...again...Lol update pwease

UPDATE PLEEASE IM ON EDGE HERE! this is too good man! please update

OMG PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY IS SO GOOD!! I LOVE AXEL X ROXAS!! keep updatin!! PLEEASE lol x xx x xx

OMG R U GONNA KEEP UPDATING?!?!? this is realy good and i'd be heartbroken if u didnt! i love roxas and axel together theyre so cute! AND OMG IS SEPHIROTH GONNA DO SOMETHIN TO ROXAS?!?! DUN DUN DUN!! please update! :) :) :) x

Axel is quite the stalker, isn't he? XD

Anyway, I don't think I have ever seen quite an idea like this. But it's perfect. Roxas loves his icecream, and Axel is the guy who gives it out. It's also sweet how much Axel cares for him, like, it's not even in a creepy way beacuase if the age difference. I really like that a lot.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Hey i know im like kinda late on commening and everything but i jsut wanted to tell you that i loved your story!
I just spent the whole night reading it and im in love with it...its probably one of the best stories i've read in a long time...
and i just wish that you would update but its your story and you do what you want with it, but its a great story!

LOL Axel's such a stalker! XD
I like how caring he is though! ^^
Roxas doesn't really seem like a Ron, that name has no pizzazz!