Very cute, and I like the short length. What I don't like, is the kissing at the end. Blech, and OOC. I think it would have been better if it was just comedy, but still, good job.

love the "I want to lick your candy cane" way funny, it was really good, but maybe a little longer would be good,

how it's possible you don't have a millon of reviews?
the fanfiction is wonderful i love itt!
"i know. i love you too, my not-so-secret admirer" ,makes me lol, i don't know why!

Taha, sweet n' fluffy!

Though, I've never heard of Tasty House. Is it supposed to be big here? Well... Beats me.

Love, Cadoan, THE SWED!

not as good as it could be. struck me as a long-term story that was painfully squeezed into a one-shot

I think you mean disgusting not discusting.