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| Moony's Lady 2007-04-21 ch 1,  | abuseIf your intention was to make me cry, then you made it. I don't know how, but I actually spilled a couple of tears by the end. I never cry, not even for serious things. so beautiful. |
| YellowDisease 2007-04-19 ch 1, | abuseVerygood! I'm trying to contain my own sobs! But it's not working! Scared me for a minute though. I though you had killed Griss. No that would have friggin sucked! Not that loosing a baby is good. Cause it most certainly is not! But, This is the what?...3rd time i've cried over a fan fiction tonight? Well, i've hit my world record! Great Job! |
| MSCSIFANGSR 2007-04-04 ch 1, | abusebeautifully written. i have suffered the loss of a miscarriage and your words brought tears to my eyes. |
| melody425 2007-04-04 ch 1, | abuseA true treasure. You write with such expression. You also write with mystery (I didn't know that it was the baby until near the end, I was afraid it was Grissom at first). Please keep up the amazing and talented work! |
| devilssmile666 2007-04-02 ch 1, | abuseOMG! That was so beautiful, well done! Please keep up the excellent work! |
| Aiden86 2007-04-02 ch 1, | abusehttp://w.kizzes.de/Knutsch/90746_1 loved the fic! keep writing. |
| Lilith 2007-04-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw, here we go again, you brought the deepest angst back. It was wonderfully sad, but so damn well written. I wish i had your writing skills... You can convey emotions so concretely! Great job, I hope you're going to keep up DA Angst. ;) |
| just lurking 2007-04-02 ch 1, | abuseI lost my first child. I was only 3 months along, but it was devistating. I had wanted a babysince I was a child, but I did wait 'till I was old enough. People acted like I should have been over it in a week. Acted like being upset was wrong. Even my husband didn't understand my mourning for so long. 18 years later I still wonder what it would be like to hold that child. I have 2 other wonderful kids... but you never forget the one you lost. Very nicely done. You showed the pain and angiush without making her seem to be weak. thank you so much. |
| CSI-LoVe-GSR 2007-04-01 ch 1, | abusewow that was such a good story so sad and sweet and truly real |
| Kat 2007-04-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was a lovely story. Beautiful, sad, moving. Thanks for writing it. On constructive crit - I think you gave away too much in the summary. You could have let us discover it on out own. |
| TymeNimo 2007-04-01 ch 1, | abuseawesome, very moving :) |
| Lost sessions 2007-04-01 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, that was so beautiful. |