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MoonlitCries
2009-11-28 . chapter 1
earplugs...enough said
Keuraki-SoraXRiku
2009-11-13 . chapter 1
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD, I LOVE THIS! XD Great one-shot, i really must say. There's so much depth and ... well, greatness about it that's sometimes lost in a one-shot because, well, it's a one-shot. DX

I'm really beginning to become a fan of you. *shakes pom-poms*

XD

So, like, ima read some more of your stories. Kay?

Yeps.

Regards,
Keuraki-SoraXRiku
sweetkingdom
2009-11-11 . chapter 1
I love this story so, so, so, very much!
Your writing is wonderful! Like the kind of writing that makes searching through so many mediocre and cringe-worthy pieces of fanfiction all worthwhile!
I love the slightly immature and quite light point of view that it's written in, it's not all ansty and deep, which can be good too but it's nice to read a nice, light, funny and still sexy story (how do you manage it!?). The overprotective brother Roxas is so fantastically funny! (Especially since you made him younger, loved that about him) I liked that family-ish bit a lot; it was exactly what the story needed to make it feel complete.
I have to admit that one of my favourite bits in this was when Sora was sorting the shapes away from each other in his lucky charms and then getting them muddled up...I don't know why I found this bit so endearing! It was just such a wonderful way of showing how Sora was feeling that it made me smile like an idiot.
I can’t seem to stop reading this story! It’s a feel-good kind of story that always makes me laugh and improves my mood.
Fantastic…I’d give it 9 / 10
XD
Daikon
2009-11-07 . chapter 1
Rape! RAPE!!

XDD I laughed *so* hard.
Masami Kyoko
2009-10-15 . chapter 1
I LOVE IT! SORA IS FRIGG'IN CUTE! KEEP IT UP! LOVE YOUR STORY!
miahmy
2009-10-08 . chapter 1
this was cute.
made me smile.
lol, vibramoogle.
nice work! *thumbs up* !!
Alstarryn
2009-09-28 . chapter 1
I'm not big on Riku and Sora, but gawd did I laugh my ** off at this. Nice job, hun!
Deaths.Last.Prayer.
2009-09-10 . chapter 1
Love this so very much and wish there was more.
Kyoki Kiss
2009-08-31 . chapter 1
lol... I don't know. I'm a bit dissapointed that the plot and characters kind of went poof, but it turned into a funny PWP.

Vibramoogle?! harhar! And Sora is a dummy. Take a hint man! Desperate Riku is probably the funniest. Can totally see him trying his best to molest Sora without care of consequences...

I do kind of wish you had kept to the style at the begining of the fic though. It's an interesting, if not a bit creepy, way to get two people together. :)
teddikins
2009-08-22 . chapter 1
I LOVE THE WAY TO WRITE SORA AND RIKU AND OMG THE RELATIONSHIP THEY HAVE! ('m sick so, i'll give a better review later, sorry)

and well, you are amazing.
dragonsfairy
2009-08-18 . chapter 1
I LOVE how sora kept shoving Riku out the window. Very well written. (sorry I suck at reviews, but wanted to say something)
akuzexu-akuno-zemyx-yum
2009-08-16 . chapter 1
Love it! thank you, youe always awesome.
keysandhearts
2009-08-04 . chapter 1
Amazing!

Your writing is hilariously detailed and the story was very original.

Thanx for a great read!
syrical
2009-07-29 . chapter 1
That was so hilarious. I quoted more lines at my friends over AIM than would probably fit in this review. Oh, poor Rapeku--er, Riku and his abusive Sora.

Awesome work!
Rayne Master
2009-07-22 . chapter 1
Totally crack monkey funny! I'm routing for Riku all the way after this.
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