 sesshypuppysbff 2009-01-22 . chapter 4AH! So cute! So true! KYA! |
 breathlessnightxx 2009-01-07 . chapter 5lol i liked this one :D it was funny :3 |
 loser in the gutter 2009-01-06 . chapter 5aw that was cute. i'd love to see them 'shake it like a salt shaker' one day! so cute. |
 Paon 2009-01-06 . chapter 5i hope you are kidding because i would hate for you to name your child "paon" which means peacock.
great chapter. glad you didnt stop writing this ficlet. |
 Visual Confectionary 2009-01-06 . chapter 5You're my favoritest genius, baby.
XD
I lol'd so hard though. |
 loser in the gutter 2008-09-28 . chapter 4i would KILL to hear those walls. =] |
 Mage of Dragons 2007-11-07 . chapter 4hahaha these are really cute :)
i especially liked the last line of this one
:) |
 Modern Sherlock 2007-11-05 . chapter 4"If Edward Elric’s walls could talk, they’d probably be screaming like a rabid fangirl right now." I LOVE that. Where do you get these lines? They are just too hilarious!
And I don't know about Ed's walls, but after reading all your fanfics this morning, I am most certainly squealing like the rabid fangirl that I am.
Great writing, and I really mean that, by the way. Your writing actually requires some mental engagment, unlike most other people's writing. And that is a good thing; it saves me from boredom. You don't use the same 3 adjectives again and again, nor do you over-explain the trivial details, which would result in lots of eye-rolling (from me, at least).
All in all, you are an excellent, well rounded writer. Congrats! |
 yaoininja 2007-08-18 . chapter 4xD these little ficlets things are awesome...how they are somewhat vague and yet...descriptive. Great job keep up the good work ^^ and omg I just thought of something...my friend Blayne told me Ed and Roy weren't real so I beat him with a shoe xD
~The Yaoi Ninja |
 Ari 2007-08-09 . chapter 1 I do believe "sticking it "in" the man" would be more appropriate. >.> *shot*
Great job on all of them. XD |
 gurl.from.damnation 2007-07-09 . chapter 3I have one word for this: Genius. Pure genius |
 Sai*Sai 2007-05-01 . chapter 3 WOW I LIKED IT! Pretty good! I love Ed in yaoi fics especially with mustang! Gawd they are so hawt together! This fic made me laugh so hard! But I would like lemons please! Lemons are my fav. In fics. Though I hope that you didn’t get flamed for this cause I liked it alot! To the ppl that didn’t like this, they can fuck the fuck off! Ha-ha well hope you update soon! Bue-bye!..: Ed in dress:...haha! ~gothic_angel_of_death~ |
 ~Sarah~ 2007-04-23 . chapter 3 i would like you to finish this because i like it. im reviewing to say that i want you to keep going on and on with this...that is all... |
 Visual Confectionary 2007-04-23 . chapter 3rofl.
ily. |
 Roy Mustang 08 2007-04-14 . chapter 2The chapter was awesome update soon |