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camkiyo
2009-11-07 . chapter 5
That was hilarious, and fun, and entertaining, I was laughing in my seat ! Edward wanting to get physically active with Bella, and his cravings ! He searched through Rosalie and Emmett's closet, and Alice and Jasper's too ! Ah ! Then he buys condoms from a random guy's truck trunk ! So desperate, Edward, and that was really fun to read, thanks for posting this ! ^^
christina
2009-10-25 . chapter 5
OMG! I loved dis story
wonder wats happening next
poor eddie.. ** i said it too
buffy and twilight forever
2009-10-20 . chapter 5
hahahahahhahaha
so funny
right some more random chapters
alicepalacex
2009-10-07 . chapter 5
haha i loved the ending ;)
alicepalacex
2009-10-07 . chapter 3
lol barry white!! hehe
a water fight. where do you come up with these ideas ?? hehe
msREDpen
2009-10-05 . chapter 5
Loved it! Very funny!

Are you going to continue this story with the girls night? Or is it somewhere else?
lovepeacetwilight
2009-09-20 . chapter 5
so funny :) PLEASEpleasePLEASE write more soon!
bmthespian
2009-09-03 . chapter 5
Great and funny story...hope you decide to continue it one day
Midnitelilly
2009-08-26 . chapter 5
Great story!
iROCKskinnieez
2009-08-23 . chapter 5
VERY-FUNNY-LOVED-IT
thatonegirlxx
2009-08-11 . chapter 5
Best one I've ever read!
Your an excellent writer!
Oh, please keep going!
Please?

xx;
Cantante124
2009-07-28 . chapter 3
Wait-cold showers don't work on vampires, since their body temperature is so low. Otherwise, you're doing a great job, especially since this is your first fanfiction! Keep it up! :)
TeamJasperAlice
2009-07-28 . chapter 5
Great story
SarySoda
2009-07-25 . chapter 4
lol Jasper is hilarious
SarySoda
2009-07-25 . chapter 3
She got rid of the other sock just before she lost her balance. lol

Bella trying to be sexy. lol
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