 camkiyo 2009-11-07 . chapter 5That was hilarious, and fun, and entertaining, I was laughing in my seat ! Edward wanting to get physically active with Bella, and his cravings ! He searched through Rosalie and Emmett's closet, and Alice and Jasper's too ! Ah ! Then he buys condoms from a random guy's truck trunk ! So desperate, Edward, and that was really fun to read, thanks for posting this ! ^^ |
 christina 2009-10-25 . chapter 5 OMG! I loved dis story
wonder wats happening next
poor eddie.. ** i said it too |
 buffy and twilight forever 2009-10-20 . chapter 5hahahahahhahaha
so funny
right some more random chapters |
 alicepalacex 2009-10-07 . chapter 5haha i loved the ending ;) |
 alicepalacex 2009-10-07 . chapter 3lol barry white!! hehe
a water fight. where do you come up with these ideas ?? hehe |
 msREDpen 2009-10-05 . chapter 5Loved it! Very funny!
Are you going to continue this story with the girls night? Or is it somewhere else? |
 lovepeacetwilight 2009-09-20 . chapter 5so funny :) PLEASEpleasePLEASE write more soon! |
 bmthespian 2009-09-03 . chapter 5Great and funny story...hope you decide to continue it one day |
 Midnitelilly 2009-08-26 . chapter 5Great story! |
 iROCKskinnieez 2009-08-23 . chapter 5VERY-FUNNY-LOVED-IT |
 thatonegirlxx 2009-08-11 . chapter 5Best one I've ever read!
Your an excellent writer!
Oh, please keep going!
Please?
xx; |
 Cantante124 2009-07-28 . chapter 3 Wait-cold showers don't work on vampires, since their body temperature is so low. Otherwise, you're doing a great job, especially since this is your first fanfiction! Keep it up! :) |
 TeamJasperAlice 2009-07-28 . chapter 5Great story |
 SarySoda 2009-07-25 . chapter 4lol Jasper is hilarious |
 SarySoda 2009-07-25 . chapter 3She got rid of the other sock just before she lost her balance. lol
Bella trying to be sexy. lol |