 Alas de lombriz 2009-08-04 . chapter 5this story is very well written and very interesting please continue it in volume soon i would love to read more of your work. |
 yellulhchicken 2008-10-25 . chapter 2so... whatever happened to vol 2?? |
 ... 2008-09-06 . chapter 5 Need... Status... Update. |
 Guardoflight 2008-08-11 . chapter 5I liked the story and I hope you continue it, will you be releasing the next volume on a new story? Will you even be continuing the story? I would love to see a new addition to fill in some of the gaps that the story has left. Please reply |
 Six-string Samurai 2008-04-30 . chapter 5Very enjoyable, I look forward to reading the next volume when it begins. |
 Ruzio03 2007-07-04 . chapter 5Yay! A crossover between two of my favorite anime's! Keep up the good work |
 gen x 2007-04-17 . chapter 1 Strange. |
 The Gandhara 2007-04-13 . chapter 5 Surprisingly, I didn't like this chapters too much. Maybe it's due to not have seen Maria-sama or because we saw it through Ranma's eyes, but I just felt that the girls kept droning on and it took forever to get to the point. |
 Ookii Mamoru 2007-04-13 . chapter 5Excel Saga?
You Poor Poor Soul.
Now, how will you ever sleep?
I'm sort of lost in this chapter, but I'm sure things will be explained in the next.
Yep I went to class, Can't remember the last time I missed a class. Thanks for your concern. :-) It was a review session for the next test. (Yippe, Seen it once, Seen twice, and I'll see it once again.)
Now off to study!
OM |
 Ookii Mamoru 2007-04-12 . chapter 4Another great chapter, class was boring. :-(
Onee-Sama, O boy, how will Akane ever react.
OM |
 Ookii Mamoru 2007-04-12 . chapter 3Yippe, finished the chapter before class... It very rare that I'm this drawn into a story. Stupid accounting... who care what AQ*(AR-QR) means. :-)
OM |
 Ookii Mamoru 2007-04-12 . chapter 2ROFL, this is great! To read the next chapter, or skip class...
Humm... I think I have time.
OM |
 Ookii Mamoru 2007-04-12 . chapter 1This is proably the best parapraise of Ranma'a life I have ever read. Norally I just skip ahead on into the story, but this time, I stuck around.
Great Job
OM
A fanfic reader for over 14 years. |
 Alex Ultra 2007-04-11 . chapter 5Interesting, with a touch of loopy; not exactly in the Ranma style, but I suppose if nothing else this is setting up the tone for the... um, other, Marie-something show it's apparently a cross with.
I'm kind of interested to see just how well Ranma-chan adapts to both the siuations of the school and whatever her new responsibilities will be with her new 'position', as anything that happens to Ranma usually has consequences that he/she finds difficult to deal with, even if others would kill to be in that very same situation, it's just how Ranma's life works, ne? ^^?
Carry on.
Alex Ultra: With No Carry
LATER |
 Xylix 2007-04-11 . chapter 5Stories like these are proof that sometimes voice alone can carry a story. Your voice for Ranma is excellent, and for all intents and purposes makes up the heart of this story. Listening to Ranma wax and wane about this and that is wonderfully done, and filled with such character, that I believe I would probably continue to read this even if there were no plot at all.
That being said, the ending to this chapter could have used a little bit of reworking. For instance, making it clear that Ranma just couldn't say "No" (not that he/she wanted to say yes!) would have provided a more believable transition into that.
That, and a touch more description would be nice.
But again, kudos for using the first person perspective for what it is best at. |