I can totally see this really happening in the book. Once again, so in character it's like there yours. Fantastic, and I love the last line. So true.

I think you have Ron and Harry perfectly, and I loved the last line!

It doesn't seem like the right reaction, but I laughed . . . a lot . . . reading this. I really like the way you don't have much about the setting or backstory; it makes the dialogue flow so well. Your characterizations were great; particularly Ron. Great job :)

It's dangeous to make people laugh that loudly. Especially when their parents are in the room next door, fast asleep. But I'm going to thank-you anyway, because I haven't read a piece quite that hilarious in some time. Thank-you!

haha! Poor Ron got set on fire. Great story. :)

This is an interesting twist for the story, though Ron is very well portrayed. And it's true, Harry probably

hahahahahahha well the inferius was ver creepy but i loved the dialogue between harry and ron:) you're just really good at keeping them in character and that was so funny about how harry was practicing the one eyebrow look:)

Aww, that was absolutely adorable. I don't know if it's supposed to be, but in the funny sense, it truly was adorable. I loved Ron's last sentence because it really was true.

Great job!

Harry would've given that thing a hug? LOL Not so sure about that since he had an unpleasant meeting with them already, but I'll take Ron's word for it.

I don't care where they were, it was spot on.

"It just seemed the thing to do." sets the "courage"

"I should have clarified," Ron says much later. brings the comic relief.

I liked it a lot...

This was very good but a bit confusing; maybe you could tell us a bit more about where they are, what they are doing, etc. In truth, I don't think I understood what you wanted to get accross here. But still, the characterizations were great.

- Gaby

This is a little odd, but it's well written and unique and funny. I really like the last line, especially since it's so true. And really, it's so easy to be critical and say "why didn't you blah" once the heat of the moment is gone.

funny... i liked it it was good and well written

Ah, I really enjoyed this little oneshot; well written and good characterisations. Good job! :)

Clever little one-shot, this, with great characterizations. A little vague, but not so much that the setting is completely confusing-to me, it seems like something that could have been a snapshot out of DH, maybe when they were staying in Grimmauld Place, but that's not necessarily the impression you were going for. All in all, nice job!