nice

Cute and sweet. Kudos to you. Write more plz

Lovely! The father/daughter theme is so beautiful it makes me want to cry. Mulan is such a cute baby.

Increddibly sweet.

aw. that's so cute. love it. UPDATE!

Aww-ness! This is so sweet! I like it a lot.

This is GREAT! The next schoolastics writing contest rolls around, you should submit it unless it's against the rules(it is, come to think of it. Oh well.). it's good competition for my entry, and that's saying a good deal!

that's such a true bittersweet story. I like it! please write more...if not to this story...more stories.

I've read this story so many times, and I still love it! I really hope you update soon, because I really want to see where it goes!

Great Story!

Me want more!

I want to know all about Mulan's childhood with her father.

Its a sweet story!

PLEASE...PLEASE...PLEASE...PLEASE WRITE MORE!

This is a beautiful tale of what it is to be a father and a parent. I think you are doing a fantastic job (but do update!).

Hi, I really like your story hope that you will update soon. I waited for like a year to see chapter 3.

That's so sad, but it's true! Keep writing, this is really good! :)

aw...that is so cute please continue!

Keep writing! This is really good!