Hey! Pan's labyrinth now official catagory in Movie section!

Your writing is so beautiful!

This is wonderful. An excellent interpretation. Please continue!

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Mort

Awsome story. The end of the movie left me crying for hours. I'm happy to see that she would be a loving and caring princess in the world where she came from. It is interesting to hear this 'epilogue' in Pan's language. I love it XD

Your prose here is gorgeous, and this makes an excellent, unearthly extension to the existing storyline. Most importantly, I think you've really begun to articulate the faun's motivations in a way that suits a creature who was alive before the notion of kings and princesses had ever come into being. Very well done.

Well, I told you on deviantart already but I'll love to repeat myself: well written and a good read, even if one doesn't know the movie (yet)

Kisses from sunny Vienna!