Sounds interesting. Sorry I haven't been keeping up with it, I have been avoiding fanfics with all the schoolwork. You ended it nicely, and you finally brought Raven in! *shouts of joy* Y'know though, it'd also be a cool story if that vision of Dove's WAS real and Raven was just pretending it didn't happen and she was using some type of illusion and... there I go again. Good job. I'll read your next one as soon as I get a chance.

good good!! but i wanna ask, IS IT GONNA STOP HERE? WHERE THE STORY ENDS WITH DOVE OVERCOMING HER DEPRESSION AND RAVEN NEVER COMING BACK?! IS THIS STORY GONNA CONTINUE OR END?! um yeah...sorry for that but please dont stop here!!

I realy liked it so far so can you please cointinue.

Awesome. I am really excited about the Toes Trilogy.

""Maybe it won't be so bad without Raven after all...""

If Dove thinks too much like that then... Good chappie. When's Raven comming in?

Ok, seriously, WHERE ARE ALL THE REVIEWERS?! It just doesn't make any sense...

Whoah, Dove's close to insanity right now...
Not mch happened in this chappie, but it really shows how strong the bond between Raven and Dove is.
Looking forward to the next update.

This is turning out to be a great fic. Man, I really wanna know what's up with Raven. Did Raven leave just to see if Dove is strong enough to controle her powers on her own yet? If so, when is she comming back? I really hope following chapters will answer a few of these questions...

totally cool m8 its lk really mysterious lk lol me can't wait 4 the next bit.
well done on the fic m8

Whoot! Dove's back! Man, I love these stories you write about Raven and Dove. Anywho, this fic is very intriguing and it proves promising. I can't wait for the next update!