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TatianaMik
2008-03-22
ch 44,
abuseI'm laughing at Danny freaking out at the thought of twins. Congratulations on finishing the story.

BTW a little nitpick, just FYI you mention Giants tickets and homeplate. Giants are a football team. There isn't a homeplate in football. The prime tickets are either 50 yard line or endzone. Homeplate is baseball, which for NY would either be the Yankees or the Mets.
OperationMarketGarden
2008-03-12
ch 44,
abuseReally cute. I liked the story. One thing irked me though, the NY Giants are a football team, not baseball. Sorry it is a sports fan thing.
CaRiNeSs
2008-03-12
ch 44,
abuseAww...how sweet... I am glad you ended it there...any chance of a sequel? Great job! Loved it!
ncisabbylover
2008-03-11
ch 44,
abuseWOHO great work its a wonderslu amazing story and I loved the whole thing
love abbylover
TaeKwonDobabe74
2008-03-10
ch 1,
abuseI found your sequal , it's very good !

Love your stories !
Tiana-P
2008-03-10
ch 44,
abuseSequel! PLEASE?!?!!?
I just love your stories!

Tiana XOXO
Bec0512
2008-03-09
ch 44,
abuseAh you can just imagine Dannys face when she said twins.lol. Hope you write a sequel. Great Story. :)
loveRomance1
2008-03-09
ch 44,
abusethis was a great story, any chance for a sequel?*starts praying that there will be*
soccergal15
2008-03-09
ch 44,
abuseWow, loved the epilogue! It was so cute! Great job to the story, I'm so sad it's over, I've been following it for so long. I'll stay tuned to see if you write anything else... hint hint :)
Marian MacKenzie
2008-03-09
ch 44,
abuseI really hope you write a sequal to this. I think it would be hilarious to see Danny with twins. Keep up the good work!!:)
Baby Jefer
2008-03-09
ch 44,
abuseI just re-read the prequel to this (biazrrely, AFTER re-reading this one!. You write really enjoyable, easy to read stories. They aren't too overwhelming, but equally there is enough happening that you aren't bored.
I'm sad to see that this story has ended, but I hope you write more DL soon!
katydid13
2008-03-09
ch 44,
abuseAn excellent end to a great story!
LiaBelle
2008-03-09
ch 44,
abusevery sweet ending. i loved it!
edward-and-bella-forever
2008-03-09
ch 44,
abuseTWINS! loved danny's reaction. is this really the end though? ): love your stories!
gymgurl
2008-02-15
ch 36,
abuseawesome story
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