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mssammydean
2008-07-26 . chapter 1
LOL aw stupid transport..that's why I hate it! haha

Poor Deanny..people should take it easy on him and his brother! LOL
Shy-Shadow Reckless
2008-06-11 . chapter 1
I feel Dean's pain, but I thought Dean was actually pretty lucky and if you think your public transport is bad, you should try Cityrail and Sydney buses.
JenBurch
2008-02-01 . chapter 1
hehehe This was great, and a perfect example of why I avoid public transport like the plague! I HATE public transport! Never liked buses - dealt with many body odours over the years and yes, was even serenaded by a drunk man singing 'pretty woman' and then trying to follow me off the bus! Trains I havent had to use as often, and they're marginally better but only just. We just got a new train line here and, predictably, I'm the last person I know to use it! lol I'm VERY much like Dean in that sense, I MUCH prefer to drive everywhere! Even if I do have to pay for parking, that's a small price to me when it buys so much convenience! Public transport isn't just a nightmare, it's exhausting! I'll never do it if I can help it. I went on buses not long ago coz I was out with a friend and she likes buses and stuff, but it was so miserable for me I'll NEVER do it again! She thinks I'm nuts, but I dont care! Besides, the last bus I was on... yup! The driver went over the curb!

*sigh* Okay, so this story could've been my last trip on public transport! You been crawling around inside my head? LoL

Great job!
Charlie Girl 79
2007-08-13 . chapter 1
LOL, wonderful tale. Bad Sam not being there when Dean arrived and the Hotel staff were perfect.
Catasauqua
2007-05-24 . chapter 1
OMG! I know that little old lady! She has a cane with four legs and grey shoes! LMAO

"Bathing and brushing your teeth are also good."
"I've never been so insulted in my life."
"Then someone has been too kind." ROFL!

>champion racing cow< hehe

"Police arrested him last night.." LOL! All for nothing! Hahahaha!

Loved your story! Why am I not surprised? Thank You!

Cat
SciFiNutTX
2007-05-08 . chapter 1
I liked that. You had me laughing there! Loved the fat woman on the train complaining about his music!!
cHoCoLaTe-cHiHuAhUa
2007-04-06 . chapter 1
Poor Dean! And of course, poor you for having to actually go through some of that crap. I love how the receptionist was skeptical about them being brothers- cause I never thought that they looked alike, either. Oh! And I absolutely adored the 'lovers tiff' comment. Great story!
NovemberSGA
2007-04-04 . chapter 1
That was so funny!! But at the same time so very painful. I was laughing but at the same time I felt guilty for it.

I could just imagine the poor guy (and you) in these situations. They really do test ones resovlve to remain sane.

Sammy, Sammy, Sammy...wrong thing to say to Dean after the kind of day he had...

Sam really should have made sure Dean was signed in and oould get in the room though.

The hotel staff...sound pretty much spot on from what I've seen.

Poor Dean.

Say goodbye to the Impala Sammy...

Hehehehe (ahem...supressing the urge to giggle now.)
TraSan
2007-04-03 . chapter 1
LOL

We have zero mass transit here in the valley, so I've never had to suffer with this type of problem. However, I could certainly glean Dean's intense frustration with the whole thing, especially for someone who likes to be in control as much as he does.

Very good!
Ciya
2007-04-02 . chapter 1
OMG that was completely hilarious! Alway knew there was a reason I didn't want to take a commuter train, beside there aren't any in South Dakota, but your sterotypes are great.
WildCat9221
2007-04-02 . chapter 1
Poor Dean. Public transportation is a bitch!
YourOnlyBelle
2007-04-02 . chapter 1
I loved it. And it sounds so oddly familiar to my own experiences with the London Underground system. And trains, of course. This was hilarious and I was laughing the entire time. Good work!
heather03nmg
2007-04-02 . chapter 1
Very cute story, poor Dean, poor you!
Cards
2007-04-02 . chapter 1
Hilarious, but unfortunatly American public transit isn't actually good enough for that. There's only like city wide public transit. If we had a half way decent national rail system the world would be a much better place
WinchestersGirl
2007-04-02 . chapter 1
long, but oh so adorable. lol. loved it! :)
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