all of these stoties are soo sweet & gentle!i love them-keep on going!

o-my-god that was one of the most awesome/cutiest stories i think i have ever read

this is so freaking beautiful !

this is a great set of oneshots, i hope you continue writing them. i would also like to read about the scene mentioned in this chapter when soubi confronts ritsu's parents.

I loved this one, its my favorite so far. I thought the comparison between Soubi and the flowers was great.

what the hell could i review about this?! it's so damn perfect, there's nothing, nothing at all i could criticise. it's just perfect, as i said, everything's perfect, and it made me happy...and it's a simple happiness, coming from a perfect dream, dreamed by everyone of us...and...i should just shut up. we should all try to get our Soubi or our Ritsuka, depending on every one of us. everything about them reminds me of my definition of the essence of life. this is it, people. if you're searching for something, search for Beloved. that's all, folks. it's pretty damn simple. thank you.

These are beautiful chapters. It's not marked complete, but I'm going to assume that it is, as that's the perfect place to end it. Excellent writing and a deeper look at their relationship than I'm used to. :)

You write beautifully. Really you do. I'm completely envious of your writing skills. The chapter was wonderful and beautiful and brilliant, and I loved it.

finish

. . . I like the first part, but the year time jump seems... rushed. What happened during that year? I doesn't seem rght to leave all that time out.

~Immortal Sailor Cosmos

nice. i expected him to be at a graveyard. but it's nice the way it is.

I loved it.
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You kinda confused me by jumping around.
The time line was a little puzzling, but I loved the plot.
You're a very talented writer, I wish you much luck, and I will be looking forward to reading more of your work.
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Best wishes.
fma.pookie

awesome story!

just wondering, what happened in the seven year time skip? Ritsuka's twelve in the manag(I think) and he's nineteen in this...

can't wait to read more! update soon!

We! Not bad! Good stuff!!...coulda used more fluffy though. :3 lol, awesome work.

I loved this. Angst and fluff are two of my favorite things. I think you did a very good job of keeping Soubi and Ritsuka in character.