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Incognito Temptation
2007-06-07
ch 1,
abuseSuicide, or death by ignorance of her surroundings? You said intentionally or unintentionally.

Anyway, nicely written. The SasuSaku moment made me smile. I've always thought about writing a story using the shinobi rules, but I didn't want to write one of the rules wrong.

Good job! :)
Flowerperson
2007-04-10
ch 1,
abuseWow. Kinda sad, but not... :S You wrote this extremely well; I felt very close to Sakura's thoughts and feelings when reading this.
Heart's Door
2007-04-03
ch 1,
abuseDude. No. Suicide. Is BAD!

It was a nice one-shot, but the ending... was so unexpected. Please tell me that she didn't actually kill herself. ^^;; That'd just be... so... BAD. And depressing. (And slightly OOC, maybe?)
karriga
2007-04-03
ch 1,
abusethat was awesome!!
a little emo, but im hoping she doesnt commit suicide..
that would make me cry T^T sniff
well another great story! god...ur an amazing writer!
HPBabe91
2007-04-02
ch 1,
abuseOh my God...

DON'T TELL ME SHE COMMITS SUICIDE! I don't think so, but then wouldn't that mean that if someone even dies unintentionally, she'll kill herself?

Woah, emo much?

-tackles and glomps you-

AHH! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! YOU ARE TEH BESTEST EEVVEERR! And you should check out my profile. I made a shoutout to you ^^.

Cha! This was so awesome! Though I do wish for a HAPPY SasuSaku from you...

-hint hint, nudge nudge, wink wink-

I DO love this, though. I didn't even KNOW which shinobi saying it was, so tankies for clearing it up!

Can't wait for your next one-shot (or update)!
AGENT REN
2007-04-02
ch 1,
abuseAH!

...

meep.

Well, apart from that it made me freak out and yell "NO!" at the computer, it was well done. Psych fics are fun, yesh?

And I am waiting for your Sakura in Oz story, Katie. :D
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