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| Incognito Temptation 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abuseSuicide, or death by ignorance of her surroundings? You said intentionally or unintentionally. Anyway, nicely written. The SasuSaku moment made me smile. I've always thought about writing a story using the shinobi rules, but I didn't want to write one of the rules wrong. Good job! :) |
| Flowerperson 2007-04-10 ch 1, | abuseWow. Kinda sad, but not... :S You wrote this extremely well; I felt very close to Sakura's thoughts and feelings when reading this. |
| Heart's Door 2007-04-03 ch 1, | abuseDude. No. Suicide. Is BAD! It was a nice one-shot, but the ending... was so unexpected. Please tell me that she didn't actually kill herself. ^^;; That'd just be... so... BAD. And depressing. (And slightly OOC, maybe?) |
| karriga 2007-04-03 ch 1, | abusethat was awesome!! a little emo, but im hoping she doesnt commit suicide.. that would make me cry T^T sniff well another great story! god...ur an amazing writer! |
| HPBabe91 2007-04-02 ch 1, | abuseOh my God... DON'T TELL ME SHE COMMITS SUICIDE! I don't think so, but then wouldn't that mean that if someone even dies unintentionally, she'll kill herself? Woah, emo much? -tackles and glomps you- AHH! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! YOU ARE TEH BESTEST EEVVEERR! And you should check out my profile. I made a shoutout to you ^^. Cha! This was so awesome! Though I do wish for a HAPPY SasuSaku from you... -hint hint, nudge nudge, wink wink- I DO love this, though. I didn't even KNOW which shinobi saying it was, so tankies for clearing it up! Can't wait for your next one-shot (or update)! |
| AGENT REN 2007-04-02 ch 1, | abuseAH! ... meep. Well, apart from that it made me freak out and yell "NO!" at the computer, it was well done. Psych fics are fun, yesh? And I am waiting for your Sakura in Oz story, Katie. :D |