A-*AWESOME*. Oh, pure Surreal and deliciously wicked because of it. Best to not try to hoodwink *her*.

Great Job!

great job getting into the mind of surrel. I always loved her darker side and you nailed it!

keep it up

stunningly creative. i loved it. stands out from the usual black jewels fanfics. Plz write more.

That's a brilliant monologue of Surreal's. I love the way you introduce the characters and fill us in on the background of the story. Great job.

Oh, I love this. I caught it on yuletide, which I've just discovered, and I'm glad to see it here as well. The voice is dead-on perfect, and I love the backstory and plot that's hinted at without going into cumbersome exposition. Great read!