 Lyra Alluse 11/20/08 . chapter 1LOL That was so funny. I enjoyed reading it. |
 Blackstrawberry 2/24/08 . chapter 1oh my god that was great |
 Moreen Cafell 2/9/06 . chapter 1(aka String-Peachpit)
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That is so cute, Sketch-san! |
 BlueMoonMayfly 8/8/05 . chapter 1lol ... i could see that happening u know... its kinda creepy... *calls the funny farm for pick up* ...two thumbs up |
 Chocolate-Covered-Coffee-Beans 7/7/05 . chapter 1omg this poem is so cute! cracks me up, lol |
 Threshie 9/8/04 . chapter 1Hehe! This's great... The syllable count gets a little off at the end, where the lines get longer, but it's still really funny. Here's some constructive comments, to make this a HELPFUL review. ;;
1. It's 'Moero', not 'Moreo'
2. If your comment in the disclaimer stands true, do you realize you've just claimed the pink-haired creep with the snake? ;; Just asking... *Whistles innocently as she goes to read more great Esca poetry*
-Threshie )
http:/w.L7s.net/ |
 Phyllis Nodrey 7/16/04 . chapter 1This is hilariously cute! |
 Kintora 1/5/04 . chapter 1Good poem. It was quite amusing! _ |
 Carrie21 6/28/03 . chapter 1That was just the greatest thing! Twas very funny! Thanks .
Great work
-Carrie |
 EscaChick 3/18/03 . chapter 1Hahahaha! Cutie! _ MOERO... Let's go burn the secret stashes together Dilly! |
 Izzy 8/8/02 . chapter 1 Funny poem. Heheh. |
 Ri-ling 7/25/02 . chapter 1That was really cool _ nice'n funny. I'm not a big fan of poetry, but I read myself into this. Besides, listening to 'Eye' by the Smashing Pumpkins all the while gives the lines a good rythm... yeah... "...it's not enough..." |
 duckish 4/29/02 . chapter 1I once spent an entire science class burning things. That got me suspended, but was very fun. Hee hee, go Dilly! |
 MysticMoon 3/6/02 . chapter 1Folken, that old meanie. That line cracked me up! Dilandau can always use his flamethrower! |
 Distrubed Q 1/13/02 . chapter 1 Nice perspective on Dilandau! Gotta love the ending to the poem; it reminds me of one I read a long time ago. Folken had to have a good reason for taking them though...maybe HE'S the one who burned Fanelia afterall...maybe he's a pyro at heart too! |