 EWW 9/23/10 . chapter 1 MY BAD,THIS MAY BE A GOOD STORY, JUST THAT I NEVER READ THEM CAUSE I CANT SEE THE REAL ACTORS TO A CARTOON. ALTHOUGH I BET YOUR STORY IS GOOD, BUT WITHOUT THOSE SICK ACTORS |
 ewww 9/20/10 . chapter 1 ewww cross over, you must be really lousy and omg! unbelievable, this sucks! cartoon with reality? are you serious! hahaha! oh and by the way! yuuuuucky artist i dont even watched that crap. dont ever mix the good great cartoon with some sickly actors |
 acosta perez jose ramiro 4/7/07 . chapter 5Nice song here.
Keep the good writing. |
 acosta perez jose ramiro 4/6/07 . chapter 4Very good job here, and nice way to have Olga in the story.
Keep the good writing. |
 staterfs 4/6/07 . chapter 1awesome |
 Hellerick Ferlibay 4/5/07 . chapter 1It looks too much like the original episode. But the 'inter-fanfic' reference to Vanessa Hudgens was interesting. Try to develop some scheme between Vanessa, Ashley, and Olga - it can give notable results. |
 acosta perez jose ramiro 4/3/07 . chapter 2Cool job here! I like this episode, and your version is greatly done.
Keep the good writing. |