haha funny chapter name

You're an excellent writer, I'm glued to my screen from this and your message at the beginning said you got even better later, do the world a favor and become an author! PLEASE

Love it!

remember me i told you you should be a writer. i still do. and thanks for continuing i wread you in high school and after three years in the military with a combat deployment i found your story and read the last two chapters and they are still realy good. and can you send me wher ea went cause i am impatiant and it wont ruin the story for me. my email is

I have to say, I think its been quite a bit of a wait on this next chapter. I still check back every once in awhile to see if you've updated, as I'm still a rabid Magus fan, and I love this freaking story. So what do you say we trade an update for maybe a nice package of homemade cookies or fudge? Write a paper for you? I give good back rubs! Aww come on!

Tell ya what, if you get bored while you think about it, you can play with my Magus chat bot. He has many many lines of dialogue and can be reached at , or /cgi-bin/webcom/caim?botnamemaguszealbot if I don't have him signed online. Heck, he might even give you some inspiration. Good luck with your writing and all things that keep you from it. Ciao!

This is an amazing story! you have a real gift in your writings. you have made many fans with this Chrono Trigger fanfic, and now do you really want to dissapoint all of them by not completing it?

Please update this fanfic. it would make many people (including me) very happy to get to read another chapter.

HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME! You've made my eyes swollen red squishy ruined mutilated balls in my face from looking at this burning screen for so long, and for what? AN UNFINNISHED STORY!

Update or I'm Afraid that you will experience a fate so horrible that it should not be mensioned on an international website... I'm watching you...

O.K seriously, brilliant stroy... loved it, adored it, want it to continue, want... never mind, this'll take all day. UPDATE

Good story, please finish, not asking for the story to be finished now, or even soon, it'd just be a shame to leave such a good story unfinished

You should realy think of writing as a profesion you are realy good at it and i am sadened to hear you are planning on ending it faster than before and I would like to get the full version and seriously i think you could be a profesional writer if no one else i would buy your books you are an insparation for me to keep writing

my email is

sincerly a fan

Chris Cavins

P.S go profesional

Beautiful chapter, even if you edited some parts. I understand the whole school/job/life thing, it's really annoying studying enginnering.

Anyway, I like the whole storyline with Fate, Ea, and Magus (I know I spelled her name worng _). Keep up the good work.

I can't...I don't know if I can find words to describe how much I'm loving this right now. This story is simply incredible, and I’m so happy that you are continuing. This latest chapter was just so...so dark, heart-wrenching and utterly real. I have to say I’ve really grown fond of Ea (I don’t think she was ever a Mary Sue!), and everything she’s going through is having a surprisingly strong impact on me. As much as I don’t like the idea of these things happening to our heroine, I certainly can feel how she is going to grow and evolve from her experiences.

I was starting to get really worried that Ea was going to end up going ‘home’ in the near future, but I’m happy to see she’s discovered where she really belongs. Oh and Try not to torture her too much more in the future (literally or figuratively), the girl deserves a break!

I’m waiting with absolute fangirlish glee for you to update, please don’t make me wait so long this time! Oh and by the by, do I sense an off-site lemon lurking somewhere in the near future*hinthint* ? I think maybe we deserve on after all the wait! D

Okay, well I like Lucca/Magus the best, but I suppose a Mary-Sue of sorts is in line. Heck, I'd do the same! Hee...you write well, at least! :)

*Beautiful* chapter. Really, really long, but still quite enjoyable. And, man, you weren't kiddin' about how it s*cks to be Ea in it. Poor, poor Ea. Your creator is cruel :P

But, seriously, I *loved* it. The descritions were awesome, the dialogue wonderful, and you really made me feel for Ea's situation. And I'm curious as to who the spy is.

I don't see how you could possibly think I'd hate you after this. And (because I feel I like I haven't finished the whole chapter without it now that I now it's in existence) I was hoping you could send me the full version. It would make me feel special ;P. I don't believe I've ever given you my e-mail address, but you know where to find me for it :P

Now, back to having withdrawls in the time that I have to wait for the next chapter.

*still lovin' it*

I am only on chapter 15 of your story, but i am already loving it. This is probably the best and longest chrono trigger fan-fin ive ever read. I love the detail of the characters and history you put into it, and am happy to know of such a a dedicated chrono trigger fan. Keep up the amazing work.

Over already? I wanted 2 read more! Uodate soon please! *Fav Stories*