i was gonna wait to leave you a review but i had to say this.

i've only so far read 6 chapters of this first installment, and i really want you to write a novel and male me a copy. this is an amazing story, and even if you didn't mail me a copy i'd still be really happy to buy a book you write!

Awesome opening. I hope we actually meet Dresden.

Is that Tessa??

what happened to old Voldy?

Great story, got here through DLP. I really loved all of your characters and your take on them. Harry had extremely good banter and the humor was brilliant.


It even gives the reader an ethical question:

Would you go to hell to have a hot, intelligent female demon/fallen angel / semi goddess in your head who could manipulate at any given time and gives you strength, wisdom and company?

Yes, yes I would.

On the other hand, i do have a small problem. I admit I am not that far with the Dresden Files books, just finished the fourth one in fact, but from what I gathered the holy swords can absolutely not be used with impure and dishonest intentions. And even though I am by no means a really religious person, I kind of liked the fact that you had to be pure to hold them.

Well, i am sure you will explain this in the following stories.

One of the best stories I have read so far, no wonder everyone recommended this

This has been an interesting tale. While I am not sure I like the way Harry is behaving with all those around him...it does make him intertaining. I wonder if Meciel would be able to be restored to an Arch-Angel again because of the sword? How did that work out with Harry and Meciel and their activity near the end...she is just an illusion!

I like the story so far. That was a really good chapter ending; if you wanted a short story I think you could hae even ended it there if not for the twinkling crucifix.

Fun. :D

love it

I haven't read any of your fics in years. I'm so glad I started looking through my old links because this is just too awesome. And two sequels for me to read!
I might just be in love with you.

A incredible story, what i know from the dresdan files is all from wikipedia, however ur story is so intresting and so detailed about the dresdan world that i feel like buying the books!

Awesome! I find this better than the books, Harry is too sappy in them. Off to the sequel...

Only two things:

1) There are various instances throughout the story where there is an error in word choice. "In lack of a better word..." should read "For lack of a better word...", little things like that.

2) The Cup couldn't have been charmed against summoning charms, as that's exactly what Krum did to it to get both Harry and himself there.

Aside from those two things, excellent story. I was hesitant at first, since I'm woefully unfamiliar with the Dresden Files, but this really is one of the best fics I've encountered on this site. Time to check out the sequels...

awesome fic man.

Nice, moving on, allbeit slowly. ciao