Awesome story. When's the next update?

Yay, Azel is getting his head out of his behind!

Okay, on to concrit: If there's something that feels particularly weird about this chapter, it's Roswell and Rosary's interactions. When Rosary died, she was ready to kill him and tear apart his land to get his Ankh, and all of a sudden Roswell brings her back and, okay, she yells at him a little but they're still back to normal right away? It's a bit unrealistic, and it feels like it detracts from the plot--especially how Roswell goes to all this effort to do it and it takes "three times" the energy he'd thought but he's still essentially fine. :/

Hmm, but I hope it gets to some beter plot point soon. :x I'm sure you didn't stick this in just for it to be -this- pointleess, did you...? DD:

Also, late review is late. I apologize. I'm getting topped by college right now. D:

Frog: Poor Roswell. Characters like him always seem to have the worst luck sometimes. And I'm glad that Azel wasn't trying to actually hurt Elena, I had thought he was, but I was wrong thankfully. Anyways, another good chapter that I very much enjoyed.

Update whenever you can! Bye!

D: THIS IS SO NOT FIXING ANYTHING, ROSWELL YOU BAKA.

;__;~

h-he's so much better off without her, but... DD: that boy is never going to listen to sense. And Rosary is worse! There he goes half killing himself for her and her only response is to hit him for it... ://

I can tell you all you need to know about Mistel and Bly, if you don't mind minor spoilers. (Heck, it's only two days though...) *nipaa*

Yay, another update!

Okay, I know this review is mondo late, but at least I've gotten around to leaving one now.

I like the way you described the sunset, and the detail in the ritual with Elena and Zilva. You're also pretty good at writing battles! I can't wait for the next update~; hopefully we'll start to see what's going down then!

Frog: I knew that's what Roswell was doing! But anyways, this was a good chapter, you did a nice job of portraying the battle scene. What kind of bird was that anyways? And now you've left a bit of a cliffhanger, though the Roswell part took some of it's effect away. Hope you update soon! Bye!

Kind of a short chapter again... ah, well.

It's about time Elena yelled at Azel; he's nice to everyone else but he's been such a prejudiced little asshat when it comes to her. Hopefully he'll start to get his head out of his behind soon...

Anyway! Can't wait for your next update~

Frog: I liked last chapter where they threw a surprise party for Yggdra. That was just too cute of Milanor. I've noticed that he seems to talk a bit differantly whenever speaking to or about his bandit group. But maybe it's just me. Anyways, I thought the dream sequences were interesting how so many people are feeling guilt. Good two chapters. Update whenever you can! Bye!

YAY for inclusion of Gulcasa! (even like this.)

NUU. D: ROSWELL, STOP BEING STUPID. DD: IT'S NOT GOING TO FIX ANYTHING AND YOU'RE GOING TO END UP HALF KILLING YOURSELF TRYING AND AND AND. DD:

You must've had fun coming up with the title of this chapter... all the Ms. And it's a good one. :D

YAY for update, NUU for short, WOW at all the angst. :O More soon~?

Updates are good! Traitors from the inside are NOT! D: Hey there, whoever you are (they ARE in the castle, so at least we know it isn't Roswell... though he's still up to something he shouldn't be), stop causing trouble! Bad!

And good for Milanor and company--Yggdra needs to be lectured about the need to take a break every now and again.

Not much else to say here--although this is kinda short compared to the other stuff, and lack of Roswell makes me wibble (and worry)--but good writing as always, and keep it coming. ^_^

I like this story a lot. =) I do hope you continue, I'm excited to see what you have planned next. Don't keep us waiting too long now.

Frog: I think this is my first reveiw. I like this story, it's really interesting. I haven't actually finished the game, but I know who most of the characters are. Hope you update soon! Bye!

O ROSWELL. You are being stupid in the way that only mages can be stupid. STOP~~. Think. Do not let guilt overwhelm your rationality (such as it is... /slapped)...

And. ;__;~~ E-Emilia... you did so well with that scene. I got all teary when I read it. Poor thing...

Deserters are not good. Go deal with them, Milatchi!!

And YAY for updates, because updates are good. ^_^

Yeah! Good history! Dunno but I like angst...Oh well, is Azel a Dragon Knight or a Simple Knight? I hope a Dragon Knight, because why the name Dragon Generals if there isn´t a dragon fighter? And I can´t see the relationship of lovers between Zilva and Elena as lovers more like a master pupil or friends...And the pain from his chest maybe Azel has some dragon blood on him and Brongaa hasn´t been completely gone...
Will he start a golden era in Bronquia,like Yggdra made to Paltina?

Well! Update

YggdraxMilanor FOREVER!

Allow me a moment while I squee with joy that you have updated at long last.

*SQUEE~~*

Okay, now that that's out of the way (^_^), I'm very happy to see this continuing to develop. Adel is a baka and needs to stop snubbing Elena when he's nice to Russell and everyone else and realize that Leon was a nasty evil bastard. Poor Yggdra needs more SLEEP. D: And Milanor had better not be scheming to do anything stupid, because his buddies have enough on their plates as it is.

As for Roswell, I have a feeling I know what he's up to, and although it makes me a little nervous (knowing how obsessive he can be...), I still hope that he can succeed. Or that someone can knock some sense into him before he kills himself trying.

Now~! Here's to hoping that you will write more soon, and that we may find more lovely works from you in here. Oneshots, perhaps~? (Imperial Army plz~?)