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Alorkin
2008-09-10 . chapter 4
A nice little three-part, one-shot. (I'm not including the author's notes here.)

The first two parts showed how well Harry and Hermione fit together. I have never agreed with Rowling's statement that Ginny-Sue is 'Harry's equal in every way'. She plays Quidditch and she can cast a few spells. That's about it. Nowhere does that make her an equal. If she had properly developedd the character from the first, then I could have seen her as Harry's mate, but the dreck she wrote, came out of left field...'Monster in chest' notwithstanding.

Your third part was actually the defining moment. Not only do Harry and Hermione realize they love each other, Ginny does as well. (I did, think, however, that her turnaround was far too sudden. One second she's mentally accusing Hermione of drugging 'her' boyfriend and the next, she's admitting to herself that she really doesn't know Harry at all. It is my opinion, (and worth precisely what you paid for it.) tat this sequence should have been a bit more drawn out. While you didn't want to make Ginny the super evil witch, *some* evil here is called for.

Other than that, it was a nice bit of fluff. Alorkin.
kathrynkonundrum
2007-06-12 . chapter 4
OMG! I really like this story! YAY! I loved the part where she wanted to threaten harry with her shoe. that was great.
chrys barcena
2007-06-07 . chapter 4
i actually have no love for ginny. and i cant still accept the fact that harry would suddenly have an urge to kiss her, hermione yes (why didn't he?), cho chang obviously, even parvati (due to some freak accident not attraction).

anyways, love your story. kisses
gti88
2007-05-14 . chapter 3
It can use some work, but on the whole, very entertaining! :DD
AzureFalls
2007-04-28 . chapter 4
Lobe it, love it, love it. Well done, great story.
oceaneyz
2007-04-27 . chapter 4
another wonderful chapter..yet again! Please write another story or something because i'm hooked!! :)
SwishAndFlick31
2007-04-27 . chapter 4
*Blushes* Aww, thanks! It makes me all fuzzy knowing that someone liked my ideas. I thought that Ginny should've taken those stylish heels to Harry's throat for NOT kissing Hermione. Haha, imagine that.

"HARRY, IF YOU DON'T KISS HERMIONE NOW, YOU'RE GUNNA HAVE A HEELY THROAT!" exclaimed Ginny as she held Harry by the throat, heel nearly making his throat bleed. Hermione stood there, a confused etched on her face. And yet, she had a smirk, like she'd always known this was going to happen.

Mwahahaha, that'd be hilarous. But enough with that. I loved it!!

Thanks for writing!

SwishAndFlick31

PS: You should keep on writing stuff.
Harry's My Boy
2007-04-24 . chapter 4
yay! loved it! GREAT STORY! i wish it could keep going! :'(. oh well. mione and harry are gonna get together, so YAY! :)
Harry's My Boy
2007-04-24 . chapter 3
love it! :) MUST. READ. MORE!
Harry's My Boy
2007-04-24 . chapter 1
AWW! that's so cute! have to read more
britgurl09
2007-04-18 . chapter 4
OMG that was such a cute fic. I loved it. I love fluff, and you delivered it. I wish that you would just continue the story for one more chapter so show Ginny and Harry breaking up and Harry and Hermione getting together. That would be so...cute! Great job! Hope to read future stories.
britgurl09
I.Prefer.Boys.That.Sparkle
2007-04-18 . chapter 4
Aw! Dang, it is over. It was an ADORABLE story! I absolutely loved it! :D
Tatyana Random
2007-04-17 . chapter 4
I like your story, I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next. I like the Harry/Hermione pairing as well, but i have one question: Why do you dislike Ginny?
volleygal905
2007-04-08 . chapter 3
OMG I loved this story it was totally awesome. I cant wait to see what happens next. I love reading stories with these two as a couple. I hate author notes dont you I mean they always get the readers hopes up you know I mean the readers think its another chapter of the story but it turns out its a author note and it just gets our hopes up which sucks. Anyway like i said before i cant wait to see what happens next.
Astronomy Geek
2007-04-06 . chapter 3
luv it! i'll take pumpkin pie over chocolate any day! hhr foreva!
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