LOL u certainly kept Tasuki in character, lol. Please continue this is really cute!

Wonderful! Its Tama in character, even Nakago in character. Even the fic author written in is wonderful. They play the story exceptionally well - half in character, half acting as the story book character. And FY in Christmas Carol form? How'd you manage to think those two up in the same thought? I laughed (and snickered with everyone else) and enjoyed this immensly. 'Familiar' room, indeed. And Tasuki and Tama - perfect. Great idea and carried off so well that we neither lose our favorite characters nor the all too familiar pace of the origonal story. I'd love to hear the rest.

Jen

Favorite line: 'what, a door knocker?'

teeheehee! FunnY! Cursing Marley, that's a new one on me. I gotta see the rest, no matter HOW out of season this is.

*manages to stop laughing long enough to be coherant for a moment* This is AWESEOME! I've been part of a production of "A Christmas Carol" and your rendering is phenomenal! I love the casting, and the random notes about the author. More please!

Like it-but I would like it a whole heck of alot better if you sisn't have Tasuki actually *saying* the "f" word 12 times. That's enough to give it an "R" rating. Just 'cause you put a little warning in the summary doesn't mean you can rate it milder than it is. Believe me this as well-the suggestion of something is often far funnier and more effective than the actual dilivery of the "real" thing. @#&&*! and *(&Y$! and things like that, if ya know what I mean. :) Keep going, but keep it clean so me and people like me will wqant to read it!

Wai! I like! Continue!

*snicker* FUNNY! Please, write the second part soon! _