Reviews for Predator: Monsters

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lamyka 2008-07-09 ch 9,	abuseAlways a pleasure to read. You have only 2 spelling booboos that i caught (one being bodily not bloodily) but who really cares when you got such a great plot?? haha, I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings! Good Luck, Lamyka
Ronnie R15 2008-07-01 ch 9,	abuseGreat series you made with having the predator/yautja hunting mythical creatures. Keep up the good work and if you need a new idea for a mythical creature to use in the next story in the series(if you plan too)let me know I have many ideas for it if you're interested.
Lord CrutchCricket 2008-06-24 ch 9,	abuseOk my only problem with your story so far is that I don't check back regularly enough and thus forget which chapter you last wrote. This causes some delay in me getting my precious updates. This shall be remedied. Especially since I can't wait to see the battle between Far’hnde and the badblood. Or is Tarn'se going to use his "side effects" to tear her a new one? Updated soon, and congrats on graduating!
Dark vengeance 2008-06-12 ch 9,	abuseFantastic chapter, you've overdone youself this time plz keep up with the updates ^^
ben revell 2008-06-10 ch 9, anon.	abusewow Zet'rov is sick and Tarn'se is having worst nightmears not good I woulder what Eve would think and I can not wait until Ravyn and Tarn'se have to fight against the lycan clan that Ravyn accidently picked a fight with can not wait for the next chapter
Raptor-Chick 2008-06-10 ch 9,	abuseE... I loved this chapter... It was so well written and the fight scene was wonderful as well. I think I'm starting to like Far'hnde. Zet'rov too, but I like the villains far too much. PLEASE UPDATE!
Master of the Boot 2008-06-10 ch 9,	abuseHey, thanks for the honors. ANd now my review. For starters, I enjoyed the exposure of some of your bad blood's sadistic methods. That is so her. It seems to me that a quid pro quo is starting to be set up. The humans need help with the upcoming werewolf duel, (which will be sweet) and the Predators need help with their bad blood. The chapter was a bit brief for my tastes but congrats on graduation. I'll be graduating soon myself. Ta MAster of teh Boot
Lord CrutchCricket 2008-05-30 ch 8,	abuseExcellent as always. I'd like to see the Arbitrator taking more heads though. Despite his prejudice, he seems like a superior warrior and though he deferred leadership to Tarn'se because of experience he wouldn't be likely to remain in the background. So my suggestion is to have him kick more **. That and reconcile the notion of fighting with the guild before his stubbornness gets him killed lol.And what's the badblood doing while the honorable preds and honest humans are out hunting werewolves? Very enjoyable nonetheless. I am eager for more. Hmm now for the third one... zombies? I was actually considering such a concept myself. Also, it might be interesting if a vampire or werewolf got facehugged... don't know how you'd bring in aliens but it's an option...
starspawn07 2008-05-09 ch 8,	abusedunno what to say yet XD keep it up. let's see, we got undead, therianthropes and aliens already, so next up should be ... faerie ? mermen ? demons ? the Old Ones ( hehe, I read too much Lovecraft XP ) ? ...
Raptor-Chick 2008-05-08 ch 8,	abuseFar'hnde is kind of a jerk. He's so grouchy. Why are so many Elders and such so surly? It must be part of the job description. Hee. Hm... So you are doing a trilogy of supernatural beasties too... Could the next creature be zombies? It fits into the whole humans with something seriously wrong but cool anyways theme. Is it... Dragons? Demons? Succubi? Man, I'd like to see the Yautja deal with one of those. Is it faeries? Anyways... Loved this like usual and PLEASE UPDATE!
Master of the Boot 2008-05-08 ch 8,	abuseHello, Bastet. It's been a hell of a long time. I just wish to congragulate you on your fine beautiful chapter. The battle with the lycans was most thrilling. On other matters, the drama bit between T'sarne, Rayn and the Arbiter stimulates the intellect much dearly. I love how it plays out. You explore the predators and make them far more complex than most authors do. As to your third installment, I'm going to guess that the next batch o' supernatural beasties will be daemons. As in "The Exorcist" posession type daemons. Ta Master of teh Boot
ben revell 2008-05-08 ch 8, anon.	abusenice chapter can not beleave pred's can get infected by the lycan vires as well as the vampire althought meeting a lycanpred or a predvamp would not be a good thing and what's up with Far'hnde he agreed with Tarn'se by the end of your first story I just bet Tarn'se stays on earth to learn more about the lycans and to help Ravyn in the trouble she has goten herself in
Lord CrutchCricket 2008-03-03 ch 7,	abuseWow, smart warewolves! Although the idea of preds left helpless by them is kind of upsetting. So my reccomendation is that you update soon and relieve the stress! Great chapter by the way. As always I eagerly await more. Oh and if you need it, don't forget about the self-destruct...
Starspawn07 2008-02-15 ch 7, anon.	abuseA suggestion: according to most yogis, any conscious being can awaken their kundalini energy, which results in abundant body heat, increased health and fitness, heightened awareness/insight ... most likely the Yautja, culturally advanced, heat-loving humanoids who value both brain and brawn, can activate this potential as well. a psychic Predator with flexible limbs ( in addition to being virtually bullet-proof, fire-proof, stealthed etc ) would appear more 'demonic' XD works well with the Hunters too. plus a spiritual discipline may provide the final solution to the persistent mental aftereffects of 'turning'. ( wooh, that was detailed 0_o , anyways, just a suggestion ^_^ )
not aqua 2008-02-15 ch 7, anon.	abusetook way too long to update. and frankly im dissapointed that you would write 4 predators including Far’hnde to get beat by werewolves... Far’hnde would have slaughtered all of them if he was as cool as you wrote in him previous chapters.

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