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| killroy777 2007-10-31 ch 2,  | abuseupdates plox? |
| ShadowDragonGX 2007-04-30 ch 2, | abuseHey man, good thing your continuing this, I was always wondering what would happen to your character. Anyhow, I'd so go for the DBZ characters, it would be interesting to see that. If you could , crossover with bleach and make the demon a Hollow, more specifcally, and arrancar. If not, oh well, at least I made the suggestion. Hope you update soon, ja ne. |
| gort420 2007-04-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseI vote for tenchi muyo. |
| zellosmasterblaster 2007-04-04 ch 2, | abuseMihoshi, Kiyone, Sasami, Washu |
| Vixen2 2007-04-04 ch 2, | abuseNice to see your writing again and I'm looking forward to seeing where this series goes. Anyway the main reason I'm reviewing is to say that you had a missed word in this chapter where Setsuna say's "I want him to die" instead of "I don't want him to die". Incidently that choice he'll need to make seems rather obvious. Still wonder who she'll take from his circle to tip the final balance. I'm assuming the demon will have allies too rather than simply being so powerful that it will take all ofthem to stop him. After all with the powers you've given him I doubt something stronger than Brad will be bothered by any number of other people. |
| Someone 2007-04-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseEvil time ** pluto huh? |
| Lightsfaith 2007-04-04 ch 2, | abuseI like this story so far. I had read the other 10 lives and I can't wait to see what happens. I also like the idea of a Ranma/Negi crossover. Lastly, I pick the Tenchi one, but you got to put in Tokimi(I think that is the spelling), for the three sister goddess. |
| Amenita Virosa 2007-04-04 ch 1, | abusei am going with senile old fogey it has been a LONG ** time |
| senile old fogey 2007-04-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'd prefer something to do with Tenchi Muyo, haven't seen a decent crossover with it in ages... |
| Dumbledork 2007-04-03 ch 1, | abuseHmm. For your "All my Outers" version I vote for the DOA girls. |