Nice.

Very good story. I loved it, especially the ending. :P
~Blaze~

hey great chapter

NO, OBI-WAN, NO! *cries*

But the story overall was fantastic. The pacing and writing was great, the build-up to the ultimate revelation at the end... all superb. If I continue typing, I'm just going to babble nonesense instead of going ahead and reading the sequel... so I'm off! :) Great job!

I'm not sure if I've ever reviewed a Star Wars fic before. I've been reading many from this fandom the past few months but this is the first time that I've been compelled to review. Some stories go into action, forgoing the need to bring life into their characters... but I find I enjoy these chapters. I loved this chapter (4) where you explored Vader's loss (by loss, I mean his life, love, humanity, everything) and his almost denial of his past existence. The bit with the 'gargoyles' was amazing, especially how you tied it in with a parent's love and devotion to their offspring.

Anywho, I hope the rest of this story is just as good as the beginning. Great job. :)

Drama!

I'm so glad, Obi Wan was able to keep Luke safe and tell Vadar that he's his son. This end pulled the same heart strings as Star Wars IV.

HAH! TAKE THAT YA BLOODY JEDI! *shake fist* (And yay the 'pets' got out!)

D: OBI!

(Oh boy. Vader now knows that he is his son! HAHAHA!! XD)

...I don't like the Sentor or his son. At. All.

'It never failed to amaze Vader, the number of parents who believed the galaxy revolved around their child. If that’s what parenthood did to a person, Vader was glad he would never be inflicted with that particular condition.'

*cackle* Oh. HAH. So sure about that? ;D

(Obi!? D: )

Aww, the father and son creature things are cute! :D

*grins at Vader* Regret, huh? (And ooh, cool! Ya wanna bring the creatures along! :D)

:D what a wonderful it this

I red the other fic thinking was he only, but when I read you profile :D I almost when crazy.

I fall in love with this AU no so AU :D I like so much:D
and let me say it :D Congratulations

:kiss

:D lets read more!!

Well done.

im really likeing LJ

Fode and Beed are so... well... I hesitate to say this, but... adorable. They remind me of my cat, whom will suicidally attack anything moving that is not me. On one occasion when she escaped, she took a cyote as a foe, and attacked it. The cyote lost.

Do Gargoyles look like their medieval counterparts?

CT

I sympathise heartily. I know several politicians... brainless fools more like. I can't even stand my own gradfather, who just happens to be a politician. What a joke! Idiots, the lot of them. They should just have their throats crushed as that rather (un)fortunate one did. It would be a boon to the world if that happened!

CT