Nice - rather reminds me of NXE.

I always figured that, since NGE takes place in the future, anything we see that seems outmoded must represent some massive leap forward in technology, an aesthetic since coming 'round again at last.

But it belonging to Yui is a nice touch - though the music selection seemed a bit transparently Western.

Nah that was actually pretty good.
Nice one.
Read ya Later.

Nicely done.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

A good hour's work. I like how you took an ever-present but seemingly insignificant object from Shinji's world and transformed it into a sentimental and very personal keepsake. Kudos to you for a clever bit of plotting.

Never figured Shinji for a Floyd fan, though. God, the kid's depressed enough as it is...

Cheers,
IO

Excellent! Well written, short, and straight to the point. I thought the buildup to the end was very good. Also, I think you've got a very good explanation for why Shinji actually DOES have an old S-DAT player like that.

Congrats on a one-hour-oneshot well done!

hell, you could easily turn this one into a multi-chapter... perhaps not a multi-chapter epic, mind you, but perhaps two or three chapters, that would do.

never the less, good job!

nice fic, short and quick, a nice read.

I liked it, it has a touch of everything, Asuka being Asuka, shinji feeling threatened, the lingering presence of yui...it's good and it's entertaining, and if you plan on continuing it , that would so rock.

Answer to your three questions:

1) Yes. Continue it.

2) See above.

3) SI fics are the devil.

Good one-shot. I'll give it a 8/10. It's nice, but there could have been room for a bit of improvement. But one thing that really gets to me is one-shots that have no clear conclusion, or rather, gratification from getting to the end. You know? It felt like more of a school essay you had to write for homework than something that you really put your heart into. Stick with the big stories. Good luck!

this could be dragged to another chapter. shinji nicking something of asuka's, but good story.

It's good, naturally. Very good for an hour.

With a total of four words Shinji wins the argument. Nicely done. I guess certain things can make him sprout a spine faster than others.

Quite a bit of stuff stuck into it, considering how short it was. Some interest in Yui, a nice choice of tape, and bits of angst.

Nice one shot there, I'd say could have been longer but really it's nice where it is. Shinji and Floyd, fit together perfectly good choice for him to listen to really. For being done in an hour it's really good although there is obvious room for expansion, maybe you could revisit at a later stage and include a bit more detail on the songs on it or Asuka's thoughts after what happened.

Good work though.