Love love love it and I really hope that you write more

oh wow...ya're kinda portraying kiba as the worst friend ever. geez, it's not about his feelings getting hurt first of all. anyone with an ounce of compassion wouldn't mind what someone grieving says. and then he entices shino to sleep with him when he's feeling like that?...it shouldn't be up to shino to make amends, yeah? dunno...think you kinda mixed genres wrong? grief and smut don't really...yeah.

Pretty Pleae update! I'm sorry hinta,but kiba is shino!

cool

b-b-b-but...why'd you stop...?*tear*

anou...poor hinata-chan...

LOL while I was reading this there was a big advertisement below with Naruto on it that said "NARUTO CURSORS" XD

--awkward silence--ohh shit.lol.poor hinata. sakura is such a bitch.god.i hate her.you made her seem so simple minded.which cause me to hate her more.other than that it would be hella awesoem if you update soon.

PLZ WRITE MORE! PLZ!... IT WAS JUST GETTING REALY GOOD! PLZ WRITE MORE!

WHY ARE YOU SO EVIL!? CLIFFHANGERS ARE MEAN!... IT'S SO GOOD I NEED MORE!

eek i'm liking this ^^ I LOVE KIBA ! YAAY! ehe, update soon please :D

This is really good so far. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please update soon and keep up the good work. Happy writing.

more more more i love this chapter already

"get on your knees and beg" Oh my god I almost fainted at that part! You have to update! And please, please please don't make Kiba leave Shino for Hinata! You'll kill me! I'll fall over dead! Lol, sorry. Good job, keep writing it please!

-Tina-

I love it! It's very good! Update soon please!