Awesome story! ^^ I absolutely love Starrunner. Even though it's been a year & a 1/2 I'm hoping that you'll continue this fic. I would love to find out what happens next. ^^

very much loving your stories. This one in particular is very well written and I like what you've done with starrunners character

I am saddened by the fact that you haven't updated this since January. D8

More please? :)

Nice story and a likeable OC.
something you don't find often ^^".
Only his name isn't very creative but, well, if he was built as a clone of Starscream or something like that (It sounded like this in some chapters) it's okay for me ^^

I hope you write more,
Balrog Roike ^^

This is extremely entertaining and well-written! Starrunner is an endearing and fascinating original character with a wonderful voice and perspective, and all of his interactions with the other 'bots, and the writing of those 'bots themselves, are exceptional! I can't wait to read more in this universe.

WOW! LOVE IT! Why the hell was I not reading this sooner?!?!? Starrunner is so cute!! He is like a little kid but at the same time is very odd.

So Cobweb (Enny) is trying to get Astrotrain to stage a mutiny? (Correct me if I misunderstood) I don't get what good that will do but I am glad that Cobweb now knows that her Starrunner is alright and has given her blessing to be an Autobot.

Can not wait till the next chapter! Now could you please update Anything you like (I would love to see Astrotrain's reaction to all of this). Love this story and am going to be keeping an eye on it! LOVE IT! More please!

Drat it- you've got to continue this! It's too good to not go forward.

Such talent! I am in awe.

Your interrogation scene was superb. Emotional. Like a play I could watch and easily follow, but with the facial expressions and hidden agendas clearly out there for the reader to enjoy.

Lovely chappie!

I've been slowly reading through your fics and I have to say that I love the way you write. I've really enjoyed reading these chapters. I hope to read more in the future. Your characterization is flawless and seemless. Your plot is intriguing. Your grammar is wonderful and easy to follow. A truly excellent job. And I've really grown to love both your original characters as well as the the canon characters.

Hey there, found this story through a recc. on the TF2007 LJ community, and they were right on with it! This was a excellent read, I love your two OCs and your characterizations of all the other 'bots here, well done! The only thing that bothers me is your method of POV switching, in that you end up repeating a lot dialogue from the other 'bot's viewpoint. This is fine in a story when used occasionally, and if there is an important insight to be learned about how another character interprets the same words, but I feel like it gets overused here, and actually made it a little difficult to follow in spots. You have much less of that in this latest chapter, which helps with its flow quite a bit. In general though, the quality of your writing is excellent and I hope you plan on continuing! Swoop's gotta finish that body for poor Starrunner :D

saw this when you updated, but i've been busy.

this...continues to be as awsome as i've come to expect. umm...wow. actually the first time i read it i was quite speechless.

it was interesting that starrunner was aware--at least of himself--when he was not in his body. i would have thought he wouldn't be. but it was cool and very well done. still feel sorry for red alert. he'd a spaz, but i can't help but like him. and there's prowl looking into spark bonds. cobweb wasn't anything like what i was expecting. which only made him better. and no one ever found out exactly what megatron's up too...though i'm thinking the autobots should be more concerned with sounwave. i never liked shockwave to begin with, and i'm liking you version less and less. though i did notice that the supposition that starrunner is cobweb's forced offspring was never definitely confirmed...

waiting for more, as always

I'm thrilled you posted this here (I was lurking and reading it on your lj account but couldn't tell you how much I enjoyed it!) Starrunner is a great OC - I love his use of formal Cybertronian lingo/behaviors, esp when he meets Prime, and the whole misunderstanding with the energon...poor bot! I'm eager to see what he turns into, and find out what his past really entails!

Another great chapter. I really enjoy reading this story, so much, that i do it over and over again XP I really hope that you will keep updating. Starrunner is really awesome and my favorite part of him still is his selflessness.Keep writing and I hope you had Happy Holidays. :-D

Great start. Lots of action!