Aw...that was very sweet. Beautifully written by the way. The detail was perfect; it was almost like a movie playing my head. Great job. :)

A surprising and surprisingly satisfying ending. This is told with your usual skill and completes the story arc in a most gratifying way. The characters are clearly themselves and the dialogue believable. You do manage to pack so much into such a small space. A most pleasant and engrossing read. Well done!