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| Usagi of Feudal Moon Era 2007-04-15 ch 1,  | abuseWow. I know you said it was not going to be a happy ending but I didn't think it would lead to that. I had to actually go back and make sure what I thought happened actually happened. Amazing. I think you really captured Setsuna well. One teeny, tiny thing. Throughout the story, you used both scout and senshi. Probably just an oversight on your part but in the future, try to make sure you stick to one (preferably senshi). Other than that, lovely job. PS. An update on "The Untouchable Princess" would be very happily received. *wide smile* |
| xX.mediator. 2007-04-07 ch 1, | abuseWahh!! >. |
| BrokenAngelDreams09 2007-04-05 ch 1, | abuseVery nice story. I love the ending, but it was a little confusing during the fight. Love your stories, update soon! |
| greenman 2007-04-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou do realize the scientific community was forced to put pluto back onto the plantet status cause of the planets even farther away on different universes. |