WOW, this story is cool. I love it. I think it is better than realy movie.

I thank you for posting such a magnificent tale. You don't have to worry, because I have already seen the movie. Both that and your interpretation of it were the best there is. I liked the two new Transformers you included in your story; they really spiced things up a bit. There's currently a writer's strike going on, and the sequel to this year's biggest film may be affected. But that won't keep you from writing the sequel to your story. I look forward to reading it when you post it. Till all are one!

You need to be more accurate in your description of places. First off you cannot say that they have a house in manhattan, new york. Manhattan is full of high rise buildings. Another thing is that the sun rises in the east and sets in the west i.e. sam & mikeala couldn't watch a sunset in new york over the water, the sun sets over land, or possibly new york harbor depending on where they are at, not the ocean.

Yeah! Sequel!

Yeah, you can use the ideas I sent out. As for what a cable rig is, it's any form of a wench that uses a cable, like a tow truck's (I think). Eh, thinking about it, maybe haywire should be the computer or something instead of that. It would give him a better excuse for hacking into the mainframe without being detected.

I would have PM'ed you, but I couldn't.

This was so cool! I saw the movie and they're writing the script for the sequel already. I think it was even better than Harry Potter 5. YEAH! It was the AWESOMEST!!

Okay. How do I break this to you?

You've rewritten the movie...

Only not.

Guess what; there's already a novelization of the movie. It's pretty good. We don't need more.

PLEASE.

AW!! You story is so cute!! It follows really closely to the movie too! Great job!

I saw the movie yesterday, and this just fully sparked my love of the Transformers. Keep it up, and can I suggest a few ideas about the rosters for the sequels.

The Decepticon roster should include: Starscream (Commander), Thundercracker or Skywarp (Aerial); both F-16s), Scorpinok (Assault), Shockwave (Science Officer; changes into a Cybertronian Tank), Soundwave (Communications & Intelligence; is a Stealth Bomber), Tidal Wave (Ground & Naval Forces; converts to a battleship or separates into five M1-Abrams Tanks), Cyclonus (Aerial Assault; same form as Blackout), and perhaps Sixshot (Bounty Hunter; can transform into a missile carrying armored vehicle), and here's one I came up with: Haywire (Spy; vehicle mode is a cable rig).

You're gonna need a couple of Autobots as well, so here's a couple as well: Jetfire (Aerial Reconiassance, is a C-130 bomber), Landmine (Demolitions Expert; transforms into a bulldozer), Mirage (Espionage Agent; turns into a dragster), Maybe Inferno as well (Assault perhaps; Fire Truck). Not so sure about the last one, but here you go.

All I can say now is good luck, continue in this endeavour and carry on

It's funny how all the bad guys can fly, and the good guys are grounded.

Wicked story!!
Can't wait to read more!!

OH MY GOD! this is better than the movie and i just saw it today. how did you see it months before it came out? Review soon please i can't wiat to read more.

good, it doesnt follow the movie exactly but its close. I saw it Tuesday night, and forget any low reviews that a news paper or magazine gives it because its AWESOME!! I use to not like Micheal Bay but now he ok with me he did an perfect job.

This was really good. I saw the film yesterday and I loved it. This is almost like just reading the movie and not having to go to the movies again, but I think i will just because it was so freaking awesome! Keep up the great work.

I loved this movie so much i am going to try and see it as many times as i can in theater ^.^

great job, i love how its a little different but not to much, it needs more character though... more details.

great job love it.