 Coolforeverwasfrozen from Neo 2007-04-16 . chapter 1 I really liked this. The way you explain things is very vivid and real, the metephors and the way you use words and make them your own is very unique.
As I've said before, if you did a piece of fiction, it would be brilliant. I would be a very avid reader. :)
Well, anyways. I searched for critiques, but my usually critical eye found none. :(
You're really good. Please keep writing.
And I'd love to see some Fiction? Pleasee? *begs*
~~Coolforeverwasfrozen but call me Emily~~ |