|Reviews for Tales of the Vjel Amaj Part I: Aira's Quest|
| Killerblonde 7/2/10 . chapter 26
I have just recently finished reading this fine story! Homeworld stories featuring multiple characters and intertwining plots, like this one and Legacies, are what I feast on; and it was a fine feast at that! You ceartainly have a talent for writing, and I am itching to read the sequal.
| Killerblonde 8/11/09 . chapter 12
I must say, this is an EXCELLENT story. I noticed a few errors in capitolizing names of cultures, and Kiith Somtaaw got the name Beast SLAYER, (not Killer,) but other than that, it is flawless. I will use this as a standard when I write my Homeworld fanfiction.
| Sgt-Sparki 12/13/08 . chapter 1
I see what you mean with paragraph issues. Indeed, has swallowed my paragraph - but foremost the indents/tab-spaced paragraphs that allow the reader to distinguish two different plots flowing at the same time :(
I hope I can fix this, as this issue really confuses the hell out of any reader. I will see if I can add symbols.
| nick2951 11/3/08 . chapter 26
Well that took a while to read...
This was truely an excellent fic to read and I do look forward to part two.
The space battles got better as the fic progressed and I appluad your sense of detail in the ships you created as well as used from the previous Homeworld games.
I liked you main character as well as your other OCs and they have a real sense in creativity to them. Your main character seemed real to me and I could picture her quite well in my head.
The only issue I had was the format of the chapters where you had some of the paragraphs and speech lines to jumbled up; otherwise it was not that hard to read.
Once again, great fic and I look very forward to part 2!
| nick2951 10/2/08 . chapter 3
Well it took a while but I have to say that this was one hell of a fic so far and promise more reviews as I cotinue to read.
| nope at nope 8/18/08 . chapter 1
I like it! Very descriptive, good characters, and an excellent intro all 'round. I just wonder what that ship is at the end...
| Tombie229 6/9/08 . chapter 1
I love this story. I just keep coming back to see if there is more and sadly there isn't :( but it is addictive i have read it 3 or 4 times and still amazed. I especially loved how you described the girls passion about her homeworld and her faith.
I literally was about to cry.