 ishala8 2009-12-22 . chapter 15Okay, I admit I am obsessed. I re-read the whole fic like I've only done for one more fic in the past. Instead of jumping to interesting bits and chapters like I did with the other one though, I read this one word for word. My life must be really sad...
Anyway, I didn't find the plot any less intriguing though that last cliffhanger left me more frustrated than it did originally. This time at least, I paid more attention to all the hints and concluded that Yemon must be the killer. I'm only basing this on the fact that he killed Ayame and her soul has still to show up. There are too many questions left unanswered and many other facts that don't add up with this assumption but it's the best I can do so far. :P
Also, I had a question. Did they have liquorish in Medieval Japan? It just seems strange...
Anyway, I'll be waiting eagerly for your next update. ^^ |
 ishala8 2009-12-13 . chapter 16Reading this fic from start till this chapter has taken me two full days (that means from 10:00am to 2:30am the next day with minimal breaks in between). Only once before have I found a fic that enraptured me so much so as to cause me to neglect my health and duties. Thank god I'm on holidays or I would be dead from either suspense or my superiors. ^^
Anyway, what I wanted to say about this fic was that I completely fell in love with it. Though I don't usually enjoy mystery or drama genres and definitely not a combination of the two, this is the best fic I've ever read. It is even better than most BOOKS I've read and that is saying a lot. In the end, I am just grateful that questions weren't left swirling around for all eternity and I did not waste a box of tissues on my tears.
As for the lemons, this is the first fic I've read that contains so many of them and still has a plot. Unlike others I've read were the world is falling apart and the main couple is too caught up in each other to notice, here it actually fit! There was no repetition and it felt... right for the passionate moments to be there.
Lastly, I need to thank you about the length of the chapters. Long chapters are heavenly especially when dealing with such an intricate plot line. As things are now, I really can't wait for the next chapter to come out so keep up the good work. Also, have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! ^o^ |
 yukiheart 2009-11-18 . chapter 5 um, yea, I LOVE YOUR STORY, AD HAVE BEEN WAITING SINCE MAY TO SEE UR LATEST CHAPTER! If you can't send out a huge chapter (which I absolutely love) maybe you could send shorter chapters. All I know is that this is the best hiei/kag story on the planet, and you wont make a new chapter!
I'm wallowing in self pity wondering what will happen next!
PLEASE
PLEASE
PLEASE
make a new chapter soon!
I pray you are well and in good health!
Thanks for reading me tyrade! lol :) |
 nightshadow04 2009-10-13 . chapter 16I can't believe that it took me so long to realize that the story had been updated! I think I may have to go back and reread the entire thing... I honestly can't remember if Hiei knew if she was pregnant or not... hmm... Well I can't wait to read what happens next! |
 seiyu13 2009-10-12 . chapter 16Wow! I so did not expect that! How could Kurama do that?! That is really messed up for jim to do that to Hiei. I just gotta say that I'm excited for the next chapter and hopefully it'll soon reveal who is the real murderer. I can't wait to know who actually killed Kagome's three mates and why. I mean for a moment I thought it was Kikyo because she was Inuyasha's first love and she would have been mad when he chose Kagome over her. I also thought she killed Sesshoumaru and Kouga to get revenge on Kagome and make her life miserable but now I don't know who might be the killer. I also want to know if Sessoumaru really did father Genjiro? and if yes why? why would he betray Kagome for Kagura? Like Kagome said, if Sessoumaru was honorable he would not cheat on her and if he didn't then how did Genjiro get to look like Sessoumaru? and if Sessiumaru didn't father him who did and why would Genjiro look like Sessoumaru? I really hope you update soon so I can find out what happens next. |
 astrakage 2009-10-05 . chapter 16I am glad that I decided to read this. The summary sounded like a type of story that I don't usually read (where Kagome is accused of something by Spirit World or King Enma). I love what you have done so far and I can't eait for more. |
 Passionate Crow Rat 2009-10-01 . chapter 16This story really is great. I just spent hours upon hours reading it. Actually I don't like Hiei and Kagome pairing or at least I thought I didn't like it until I read this story. Now... I have had a change of heart!
The way you write and the plot... and the romance is amazing...
I have been hooked thanks to the plot! I keep wondering who dun it! I think... blah... I have NO IDEA WHO DID IT! I just wanna know. Maybe Naraku? But he is dead isn't he? Or maybe Kagura has something to do with it... but that would be too obvious. AH! MY MIND! MY MIND! It's in a twist! I just want to know who did it! It's so sad that Sesshoumaru, Inuyasha and Kouga had to die and in such horrible ways. Than... didn't someone see Kagome and Hiei together in the early chapters? Or maybe I'm just mistaken.
I was really happy to see Hiei kick Youko's butt. Really on most instants I really really really ADORE Kuruma but in this fic I just wanna smack him across the head and toss his kitsune butt into a river. Basically he is really, really, really, peeveing me. REALLY! I just hate his smug ways.
But what was he thinking by saying that the babies are his? lol, this will make it so that the killer will come after him. I wonder if he were just trying to get at Hiei or something. Or maybe he is actually being 'honarable' saying that she is pregnant with his kids so that the enemy will target him and not Hiei? Umm... Na I think he just did it to get at Hiei. It would be lmao funny if the killer now came after him.
Okay I'm rambling. I'll stop now!
Great story, and keep on typing. I'm dying over here. I must know what happened! (And I can't believe I didn't read this story sooner...)
Crow Rat |
 bluudyrabbitofportland 2009-09-04 . chapter 16Hello, I just discovered your works, boy am I glad I did. I finished reading Hentai Bets and had to read this.I love them both, they're funny, and have just the right amount of drama and emotions. Anyways I was also wondering how you were going to do the revealing of the murder(s)? Will you go with the all the characters in one room or something else. I can't wait to find out, I have a theory but I don't think it'll pan out. I also have no ideas about Kagura's son. I hope you update soon! Best of wishes. |
 HaydenBlossom 2009-08-26 . chapter 16PLEASE put in the next chapter, please please really soon. |
 Orihime-San 2009-08-24 . chapter 16ok ... YOU BETTER AS HELL PUT SOME REAL ROMANCE BETWEEN KAGOME AND HIEI OR I'M GOING TO SCREAM!
... can't wait for next chapter.
KEEP ON WRITING! |
 mannd1068 2009-08-11 . chapter 16Excellent chapter |
 ryuuhime88 2009-08-02 . chapter 16i gotta say you are my all time favorite authoress on , and really you are. you have good plot lines great grammar and spelling(i wont read it if after 5 chapters the author still misspells the characters names and small words...im picky) i tip my hat to you and cant wait for the next chapter in this particular story. i love how what i think and expect never seems to happen and that you arent really a traditional story teller/writer again i tip my hat ^__^ |
 Lia-xXx 2009-07-15 . chapter 16yeay!! its back!! well maybe I was a little/a lot delayed on this buh black widow miko is back!! Me so happy =) Great job Madmiko-sama ^-^ keep writing |
 xXLil BiitchXx 2009-07-13 . chapter 15Sorry about the last review, here is where you can get to the AMV: /profile?user=Chibijinnifuru |
 xXLil BiitchXx 2009-07-13 . chapter 16Great fanfic! I made an AMV for your story, I hope you don't mind, but you've really inspired me to make it. You can find it here: /watch?v=XVThMljdrJ8&feature=channel_page |