This is the first fic I've ever seen that includes all of my favorte pairings.
YAY!! Excellent!

Pretty Cool glad to see your back keep up the good work :)


-the4th-

I love it! Now to read some more...

I loved your fic. I read the whole thing in one day and I really hope you continue it, because it is the best next generation fanfiction I read. I can`t wait to see what happens next. What will Rai do now that he was beaten by his brother? If he is anything like his father he should react.And what about the Tuschikage and Keiko? They both have some plans we have jet to se so please continue.

PS: The Inner Rai is very funny! ‘Looks like Chi is blasting off again!’ - that is the funniest line in the story!:D

Haha! Isn't naruto's fluke when he farted in kiba's face when kiba had the 10 times greater smelling power or something? funny...

I think you mixed up Rai and Chi at one point. You say Rai's tied up, and later on you make Chi the one who's tied...and if you didn't, well it was confusing.

Can you say, De ja vu?
Pretty cool, lol!
But I thought it was kind of weird how the two Uchiha's and Nara's were on the same team. And the pink streaks are a little...for a boy...yeah...
Anyway, I like it how you don't really focus on the parent's couple like many stories do and focus on the kids. I'm looking forward to reading the next few chapters!

OH nice im lovin it. ^^ i like the little bit of the next chapter seems very interesting indeed. Anyway keep up the good work hope to read more soon

-the4th-

Keep it up i love the story more plz ^^

-the4th-

AWESOME. I wanna know what happened in the past . please update soon

-the4th-

History repeats itself...TRUE! Aoi loves 2 read IchaIcha, Sanae likes Ramen, etc, anyway, GOOD WORK!Keep updatin'!

RINNENGAN thats what the girl has :) Pein and Konans daughter. Wow thats gonna be an interesting opponent. I like the bios of the older Shinobi generation. Stopping time wow that is awesome. Wonder why she cant tell Sasuke?. Anyway keep it up

-the4th-

another good chapter! update again please! :]

Cool chapter i like the Jonin bios at the end that was cool keep up the good work. Update soon


yours truly

-the4th-

Sweet story! Love it~ You are so going into my fave's category! ^_^ I hope you write more soon, or whenever you can!