i adore this, i love how it's written.
undying adoration!

I tend to NOT agree with the wonderfully helpful touched-but-unbroken, who, rather than give you help with the problems they somehow managed to find, elected to snap at you instead.

WELL.

I, for one, think it's gorgeous and poetic and t-b-u might like to bear in mind that writers who use such brilliant description as featured in this story include the likes of Victor Hugo,

And it's quite obviously not complete.

And even if it was, surely it is the author's choice for it to be a one-shot or otherwise?

Fabby work Spindles. ^^

I'll stop now because I sound like Percy Weasley.

Lovz,
The Lupin Torturer a.k.a. TheSlashMonster

So sad!
Poor Remus and Sirius...

very VERY confusing and much too short!